Re: [Gen-art] [Last-Call] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-dnsop-iana-class-type-yang-02

2021-05-17 Thread Joel Halpern Direct
Thank you Lada. I had missed the union, reading the introductory material with more attention. Glad to hear IANA did an early review. Yours, Joel On 5/17/2021 8:25 AM, Ladislav Lhotka wrote: Hi Joel, thanks for the review, please see my responses below. Joel Halpern via Datatracker writes:

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-ippm-initial-registry-12

2019-11-03 Thread Joel Halpern Direct
Thanks Al. I presumed all the ducks were in a row, but thought I should ask to be certain. Yours, Joel On 11/3/2019 3:14 PM, MORTON, ALFRED C (AL) wrote: Hi Joel, Thanks for your review, please see replies below. Al -Original Message- From: Joel Halpern via Datatracker [mailto:nore.

Re: [Gen-art] [regext] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-regext-bundling-registration-11

2019-10-15 Thread Joel Halpern Direct
If we do not have agreement on what the meaning is for the relevant terms, then either 1) The document should not be an IETF consensus document (which even Informational publication is) or 2) The document should be Experimental, indicating explicitly that there is ambiguity in the terms, and on

Re: [Gen-art] [babel] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-babel-applicability-06

2019-07-07 Thread Joel Halpern Direct
I do not consider this a show-stopper (I listed it as a nit / editorial), but at least the -07 text does not look better in this regard. In my experience, if this were indeed mathematics, one would talk about a metric (how one measures) and a distance (the result of applying the measure. E.g.

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-anima-reference-model-06

2018-08-11 Thread Joel Halpern Direct
Thanks Michael. That sounds like you are covering my concerns quite effectively. On the IDevID reference, all I think is needed is to change the IEEE reference to be normative instead of informative. (Or if Toerless' suggestion is effective in your view, change the text to say that IDevID is

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-spring-segment-routing-ldp-interop-11

2018-05-21 Thread Joel Halpern Direct
Thank you. I apologize for missing the other normative items. With those, plus the elaboration on the SRMS, the status as PS makes good sense. Yours, Joel On 5/21/18 11:45 AM, Ahmed Bashandy wrote: Thanks a lot for the review The document specifies externally visible behavior that must be

Re: [Gen-art] [spring] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-spring-segment-routing-ldp-interop-11

2018-05-14 Thread Joel Halpern Direct
. I leave it to the draft authors to resolve this issue with you. Les -----Original Message- From: Joel Halpern Direct Sent: Monday, May 14, 2018 1:16 PM To: Les Ginsberg (ginsberg) ; Joel Halpern ; gen-art@ietf.org Cc: draft-ietf-spring-segment-routing-ldp-interop@ietf.org; s

Re: [Gen-art] [spring] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-spring-segment-routing-ldp-interop-11

2018-05-14 Thread Joel Halpern Direct
Thanks Les. I wondered if that were the case. Looking again at the draft, the problem then is that section 4.2 of the subject draft is not a normative definition of an SRMS. It states the general functionality, and then provides an example of how it would work in the given scenario. If the

Re: [Gen-art] Genart early review of draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-bgp-community-04

2018-02-28 Thread Joel Halpern Direct
I am having trouble reconciling two of your comments. In you rlast email you said that this is for "planed communities represent the groups of customers peers an geographical and topological related information". Planned communities is presumably a new behavior, not existing behavior. In thi

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-core-object-security-08

2018-02-23 Thread Joel Halpern Direct
I guess it is up to you. Personally, I like the idea of the verify description including some reference to how one actually does verify. I will leave it to the authors and WG to decide what degree of clarity is called for here. Yours, Joel On 2/23/18 9:30 AM, Göran Selander wrote: Hi Joel,

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-stir-certificates-15

2017-11-21 Thread Joel Halpern Direct
Thanbks Sean. On the first point, using "latter" will fix the problem nicely. On the point about CA conflicts, I understand the desire to stay out of the swamp. Given that calls are frequently international, I am unclear how National Numbering Authorities can address the issue of inappropri

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-art] Review: draft-ietf-pce-pcep-domain-sequence

2015-10-30 Thread Joel Halpern Direct
Thank you for the reply. Comments in line. Yours, Joel On 10/30/15 4:46 AM, Dhruv Dhody wrote: Hi Joel, Thanks for a review. See inline... On Fri, Oct 30, 2015 at 2:42 AM, Joel M. Halpern mailto:j...@joelhalpern.com>> wrote: I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General

Re: [Gen-art] [savi] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-savi-threat-scope-06

2013-03-27 Thread Joel Halpern Direct
Then it will be done. I will wait for the AD to decide what other changes are needed, and then will either make this change or include it in an RFC Editor note. Thank you, Joel On 3/27/2013 12:42 PM, Black, David wrote: That would do nicely. Thanks, --David -Original Message- Fro