On 7/4/24 8:15 PM, Dale R. Worley wrote:
Paul Kyzivat writes:
I just reviewed one [document of a cluster]. And this isn't the first
time I've reviewed [one] of a cluster like this.
It bothers me that he genart/artart reviews of the documents in such a
cluster don't take the related nature
Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of
draft-ietf-manet-dlep-ether-credit-extension-05
On 7/4/24 2:39 PM, Behcet Sarikaya via Datatracker wrote:
...
This document is part of a cluster of four which together specify a
credit-base flow control extension to DLEP. ...
I just reviewed one of
tps://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
Document: draft-ietf-manet-dlep-da-credit-extension-17
Reviewer: Paul Kyzivat
Review Date: 2024-07-02
IETF LC End Date: 2024-07-09
IESG Telechat date: ?
Summary:
This draft is ready for publication as a Standards Track RFC.
This document is very well w
AM Paul Kyzivat <mailto:pkyzi...@alum.mit.edu>> wrote:
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just
like any other
tps://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
Document: draft-ietf-mpls-msd-yang-05
Reviewer: Paul Kyzivat
Review Date: 2024-05-27
IETF LC End Date: 2024-06-04
IESG Telechat date: ?
Summary:
This draft is on the right track but has open issues, described in the
review.
Disclaimer:
This reviewer is
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft.
For more information, please see the FAQ at
<https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
Document: draft-ietf-6lo-path-aware-semantic-addressing-05
Reviewer: Paul Kyzivat
Review Date: 2024-04-29
IETF LC End Date: TBD
IESG Telechat dat
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From: Paul Kyzivat
Sent: Wednesday, April 3, 2024 10:19 AM
To: Corey Bonnell ;
draft-ietf-lamps-rfc5019bis@ietf.org
Cc: General Area Review Team ; last-c...@ietf.org; LAMPS
Subject: Re: Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-lamps-rfc5019bis-05
Corey,
On 4/3/24 8:45 AM, Corey Bonnell
Corey,
On 4/3/24 8:45 AM, Corey Bonnell wrote:
Hello Paul,
Thank you for your detailed review and insightful feedback. We have just
uploaded -06 to the Datatracker:
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-lamps-rfc5019bis/.
We believe -06 addresses all the concerns that you raised. Please
tps://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
Document: draft-ietf-lamps-rfc5019bis-05
Reviewer: Paul Kyzivat
Review Date: 2024-03-23
IETF LC End Date: 2024-03-29
IESG Telechat date: ?
Summary:
This draft is on the right track but has open issues, described in the
review.
ISSUES:
MINOR: 4
1)
Daniel,
On 2/22/24 4:28 PM, Daniel Kahn Gillmor wrote:
On Thu 2024-02-22 15:41:35 -0500, Paul Kyzivat wrote:
But I do encourage you to say *something* about web server based email
clients, since they are such a big part of the ecosystem. (What
percentage of all emails have gmail on at least
have had a chance to review and discuss,
we'll probably roll them up with the suggestions from other reviewers
into a new draft.
More comments interleaved below:
On Sat 2024-02-17 18:31:18 -0500, Paul Kyzivat wrote:
1) NIT: Section 9.7.2:
In the following:
"If such a proxy handles certif
tps://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
Document: draft-ietf-lamps-e2e-mail-guidance-14
Reviewer: Paul Kyzivat
Review Date: 2024-02-17
IETF LC End Date: 2024-02-19
IESG Telechat date: ?
Summary:
This draft is basically ready for publication, but has nits that should
be fixed before publication.
tps://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
Document: draft-ietf-netconf-trust-anchors-22
Reviewer: Paul Kyzivat
Review Date: 2024-01-24
IETF LC End Date: 2024-01-24
IESG Telechat date: ?
Summary:
This draft is basically ready for publication, but has nits that should
be fixed before publication.
tps://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
Document: draft-ietf-detnet-pof-06
Reviewer: Paul Kyzivat
Review Date: 2023-11-16
IETF LC End Date: 2023-11-22
IESG Telechat date: ?
Summary:
This draft is ready for publication as an Informational RFC.
Issues
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on
Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at <https://wiki.ietf.org/group/gen/GenArtFAQ>.
Please resolve these comments along with any other comments you may receive.
Document: draft-ietf-bess-evpn-mh-pa-09
Reviewer: Paul Kyzivat
John,
I appreciate your points. I understand that there are tradeoffs. Perhaps
we do need community input on this.
Normally I copy the wg on genart reviews. Since there was no wg here I
didn't do that, and forget to copy the Last Call list. How do I fix that
and include your reply? Should
Document: draft-freed-smtp-limits-06
Reviewer: Paul Kyzivat
Review Date: 2023-09-15
IETF LC End Date: 2023-10-04
IESG Telechat date: ?
Summary: This draft is on the right track but has open issues, described
in the review.
Minor Issue: How the new IANA registry is specified
Section 7.2 seems
tps://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
Document: draft-ietf-nvo3-bfd-geneve-11
Reviewer: Paul Kyzivat
Review Date: 2023-07-11
IETF LC End Date: 2023-07-08
IESG Telechat date: ?
Summary:
This draft is ready for publication as a Standards Track RFC.
___
G
information, please see the FAQ at
<https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
Document: draft-ietf-lsr-ip-flexalgo-11
Reviewer: Paul Kyzivat
Review Date: 2023-05-12
IETF LC End Date: 2023-05-16
IESG Telechat date: ?
Summary:
This draft is basically ready for publication, but ha
tps://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
Document: draft-ietf-lsr-ip-flexalgo-11
Reviewer: Paul Kyzivat
Review Date: 2023-05-16
IETF LC End Date: 2023-05-16
IESG Telechat date: ?
Summary:
This draft is basically ready for publication, but has nits that should
be fixed before publication.
NITS
with this new revision.
Thank you,
Linda
-Original Message-
From: Paul Kyzivat
Sent: Thursday, March 23, 2023 10:20 PM
To: Linda Dunbar ;
draft-ietf-rtgwg-net2cloud-problem-statement@ietf.org
Cc: General Area Review Team ; rt...@ietf.org
Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Early review
Linda,
I finally convinced the review tracking system to recognize my revision
to the review.
Sorry for the trouble,
Paul
On 3/22/23 5:07 PM, Paul Kyzivat wrote:
Linda,
On 3/22/23 4:48 PM, Linda Dunbar wrote:
Paul,
Thank you very much. Can you please change the review
struggling with the review tracking system to get the
status change recorded there, but will do so.
Thanks,
Paul
Thank you very much,
Linda
-Original Message-
From: Paul Kyzivat
Sent: Wednesday, March 22, 2023 9:25 AM
To: Linda Dunbar ;
draft-ietf-rtgwg-net2cloud-problem
<https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
Document: draft-ietf-rtgwg-net2cloud-problem-statement-21
Reviewer: Paul Kyzivat
Review Date: 2023-03-22
IETF LC End Date: ?
IESG Telechat date: ?
Summary:
This draft is basically ready for publication, but has nits that should
be fixed before
Hi Linda,
On 3/21/23 8:10 PM, Linda Dunbar wrote:
Paul,
Thank you very much for the review.
Please see below for the resolution to your comments.
The revision will be uploaded next Monday when the IETF submission opens.
Linda
I've included some followup comments inline below.
[snip]
ISSUE
<https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
Document: draft-ietf-rtgwg-net2cloud-problem-statement-21
Reviewer: Paul Kyzivat
Review Date: 2023-03-19
IETF LC End Date: ?
IESG Telechat date: ?
Summary:
This draft is on the right track but has open issues, described in the
review.
Note:
progressing them to informational rfcs.
Thanks,
Paul
Cheers,
John
*From: *Paul Kyzivat
*Date: *Friday, 20 January 2023 at 18:32
*To: *draft-ietf-ace-extend-dtls-authorize@ietf.org
*Cc: *General Area Review Team , last-c...@ietf.org
, a...@ietf.org
*Subject: *Gen-ART Last
information, please see the FAQ at
<https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
Document: draft-ietf-opsawg-service-assurance-architecture-11
Reviewer: Paul Kyzivat
Review Date: 2022-11-15
IETF LC End Date: 2022-11-20
IESG Telechat date: ?
Summary:
This draft is on the right track but ha
tps://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
Document: draft-ietf-opsawg-service-assurance-architecture-11
Reviewer: Paul Kyzivat
Review Date: 2022-11-15
IETF LC End Date: 2022-11-20
IESG Telechat date: ?
Summary:
This draft is on the right track but has open issues, described in the
review.
Issues:
Russ,
On 10/25/22 2:20 PM, Russ Housley wrote:
Paul:
Document: draft-ietf-lamps-rfc3709bis-06
Reviewer: Paul Kyzivat
Review Date: 2022-10-25
IETF LC End Date: 2022-10-28
IESG Telechat date: ?
Summary:
This draft is on the right track but has open issues, described in the review.
Issues
tps://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
Document: draft-ietf-lamps-rfc3709bis-06
Reviewer: Paul Kyzivat
Review Date: 2022-10-25
IETF LC End Date: 2022-10-28
IESG Telechat date: ?
Summary:
This draft is on the right track but has open issues, described in the
review.
Issues:
Major: 0
Minor: 1
Ni
Ketan,
I've trimmed the conversation down to just the relevant points.
On 9/21/22 10:07 AM, Ketan Talaulikar wrote:
KT> This ID-nits warning is perhaps simply because the normative
reference is not from an IETF publication and so perhaps the tool is not
able to determine if that publication
Ketan,
On 9/20/22 10:30 AM, Ketan Talaulikar wrote:
1) NIT: 1 Introduction
IDNITS reports:
-- Possible downref: Non-RFC (?) normative reference: ref.
'IEEE802.1AX'
As best I can tell there is no need for this reference to be normative.
(Its only an example
tps://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
Document: draft-ietf-lsr-ospf-l2bundles-06
Reviewer: Paul Kyzivat
Review Date: 2022-09-16
IETF LC End Date: 2022-09-29
IESG Telechat date: ?
Summary:
This draft is on the right track but has open issues, described in the
review.
Issues:
Major: 0
Minor:
tps://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
Document: draft-ietf-sidrops-rov-no-rr
Reviewer: Paul Kyzivat
Review Date: 2022-07-23
IETF LC End Date: 2022-08-02
IESG Telechat date: ?
Summary:
This draft is ready for publication as a Standards Track RFC.
Issues:
Major: 0
Minor: 0
Ni
:01 PM Paul Kyzivat wrote:
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just
like any other last call comments.
For more information, please see
tps://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
Document: draft-ietf-ippm-ioam-flags-08
Reviewer: Paul Kyzivat
Review Date: 2022-06-??
IETF LC End Date: 2022-06-14
IESG Telechat date: ?
Summary:
This draft is basically ready for publication, but has nits that should
be fixed before publication.
Issues:
I've been seeing this discussion of Russ' artart review.
But I have seen no discussion of my genart review of it. Did you perhaps
not get it?
Thanks,
Paul
On 4/7/22 4:52 PM, Mingliang Pei wrote:
Hi Russ,
Great, thank you. Please see inline. I will update RFC with the two
tps://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
Document: draft-ietf-teep-architecture-16
Reviewer: Paul Kyzivat
Review Date: 2022-04-??
IETF LC End Date: 2022-04-07
IESG Telechat date: ?
Summary:
This draft is on the right track but has open issues, described in the
review.
Issues:
Major: 0
Minor:
tps://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
Document: draft-ietf-6man-mtu-option-12
Reviewer: Paul Kyzivat
Review Date: 2022-02-04
IETF LC End Date: 2022-02-10
IESG Telechat date: ??
Summary:
This draft is ready for publication as an Experimental RFC.
Comments and Questions:
I didn't attempt to ev
sawg-mud-iot-dns-considerations-02
Reviewer: Paul Kyzivat
Review Date: 2021-12-18
IETF LC End Date: ?
IESG Telechat date: ?
Summary:
This draft is on the right track but has open issues, described in the
review.
General Thoughts:
I struggled in choosing a Summary statement. I'm caught between:
, please see the FAQ at <
http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
For more information, please see the FAQ at
<https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
Document: draft-ietf-bess-evpn-bum-procedure-updates-11
Reviewer: Paul Kyzivat
Review Date: 2021-10-13
IETF
low.
-Original Message-
From: Paul Kyzivat
Sent: Wednesday, September 8, 2021 11:15 AM
To: Jeffrey (Zhaohui) Zhang ;
draft-ietf-bess-evpn-bum-procedure-updates@ietf.org
Cc: General Area Review Team
Subject: Re: Gen-ART Last Call review of
draft-ietf-bess-evpn-bum-procedure-updates
Hi Jeffrey (Zhaohui),
You comments are helpful for me to better understand how this document
relates to the other two. But it doesn't alter my conclusions. More inline.
IIUC, RFC7117 improved the handling of BUM traffic for VPLS, but did not
address BUM traffic for EVPN. Then RFC7432
tps://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
Document: draft-ietf-bess-evpn-bum-procedure-updates-09
Reviewer: Paul Kyzivat
Review Date: 2021-09-04
IETF LC End Date: 2021-09-07
IESG Telechat date: ?
Summary:
This draft has serious issues, described in the review, and needs to be
rethought.
Genera
On 7/7/21 12:31 AM, Mark Nottingham wrote:
On 3 Jul 2021, at 2:00 am, Paul Kyzivat wrote:
I suggest you provide IANA with a template for the registry, and provide
authors of extension parameters with a template for what should be included in
a specification document.
There's
Hi Mark,
On 7/2/21 2:05 AM, Mark Nottingham wrote:
Hi Paul,
Thanks for the review; I've added the WG mailing list to the CC.
On 2 Jul 2021, at 2:55 am, Paul Kyzivat wrote:
1) Minor: Is a hit or fwd parameter required?
Is it required that an entry contain one of "hit" or "fw
tps://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
Document: draft-ietf-httpbis-cache-header-08
Reviewer: Paul Kyzivat
Review Date: 2021-07-07
IETF LC End Date: 2021-07-01
IESG Telechat date: ?
Summary:
This draft is on the right track but has open issues, described in the
review.
General:
What
Hi Randy,
Comments inline.
On 4/29/21 4:30 PM, Randy Bush wrote:
hi paul:
thanks for the review.
1) Minor: Definition of "remarks: Geofeed"
Section 3 says:
... The format of the inetnum: geofeed
attribute MUST be as in this example, "remarks: Geofeed" followed by
a URL ...
tps://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
Document: draft-ietf-opsawg-finding-geofeeds-06
Reviewer: Paul Kyzivat
Review Date: 2021-04-29
IETF LC End Date: 2021-05-04
IESG Telechat date: ?
Summary:
This draft is on the right track but has open issues, described in the
review.
General:
I'm not com
, please see the FAQ at <
http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
Document: draft-ietf-ace-dtls-authorize-16
Reviewer: Paul Kyzivat
Review Date: 2020-03-19
IETF LC End Date: 2020-07-20
IESG Telechat date: 2021-03-23
Summary:
This draft is ready for publication as a Standards
tps://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
Document: draft-ietf-detnet-ip-over-tsn-05
Reviewer: Paul Kyzivat
Review Date: 2021-02-05
IETF LC End Date: 2021-02-05
IESG Telechat date: ?
Summary:
This draft is basically ready for publication, but has nits that should
be fixed before publication.
G
Brian,
Thanks. I'm happy now.
Paul
On 12/3/20 4:22 PM, Brian E Carpenter wrote:
Below...
On 04-Dec-20 04:17, Paul Kyzivat wrote:
Brian,
One more thing occurred to me:
On 12/2/20 12:29 PM, Paul Kyzivat wrote:
Also, the goal of negotiation isn't clear to me. I gather it must
Brian,
One more thing occurred to me:
On 12/2/20 12:29 PM, Paul Kyzivat wrote:
Also, the goal of negotiation isn't clear to me. I gather it must be for
the two sides to agree on a particular value for the objective. But for
that to work there must be some rules about how values can change
with whatever you decide to do.
On 01-Dec-20 15:06, Paul Kyzivat wrote:
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the
IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document
shepherd or AD before
, please see the FAQ at <
http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
Document: draft-ietf-anima-grasp-api-08
Reviewer: Paul Kyzivat
Review Date: 2020-11-30
IETF LC End Date: 2020-10-28
IESG Telechat date: 2020-12-01
Summary:
This draft is on the right track but has open
tps://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
Document: draft-ietf-anima-grasp-api-07
Reviewer: Paul Kyzivat
Review Date: 2020-10-28
IETF LC End Date: 2020-10-28
IESG Telechat date: ?
This draft is on the right track but has open issues, described in the
review.
General:
I began this review witho
version -14
Sure. Go for it.
Thanks,
Paul
[1]
https://github.com/ace-wg/ace-dtls-profile/commit/86008b3327f32e8ac2da0aa1b0110db64e3a467f
Grüße
Olaf
Paul Kyzivat writes:
On 10/26/20 4:21 PM, Benjamin Kaduk wrote:
Hi Göran, Paul, Olaf,
Sorry for the slow reply.
I agree
I proposed at the end of the mail below (to which I
didn't find a response but I may have missed it):
https://github.com/ace-wg/ace-dtls-profile/pull/28
Does this address your concern?
Thanks,
Göran
On 2020-09-25, 17:07, "Göran Selander" wrote:
Hi Paul,
On 2020-09-17, 17:26, &
Hi Olaf,
On 9/17/20 4:09 AM, Olaf Bergmann wrote:
Hi Paul,
Responding to you remaining comments please see inline.
Paul Kyzivat writes:
* Also in section 3.3:
All CBOR data types are encoded in CBOR using preferred serialization
and deterministic encoding as specified in Section
writes:
Thank you very much for your review and the very useful suggestions
therein. Please find our comments inline. All issues that have not been
resolved in the prior discussion threads with Ben and Jim have been
addressed in the editor's copy of the draft.
Paul Kyzivat writes:
I am
tps://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
Document: draft-ietf-avtcore-cc-feedback-message-08
Reviewer: Paul Kyzivat
Review Date: 2020-09-16
IETF LC End Date: 2020-09-16
IESG Telechat date: ?
This draft is basically ready for publication, but has nits that should
be fixed before publication.
I n
Hi Ben,
Please find my comments inline.
On 7/27/20 3:10 PM, Benjamin Kaduk wrote:
Hi Paul,
Just a couple notes in addition to what Jim already mentioned.
On Sun, Jul 19, 2020 at 04:23:46PM -0400, Paul Kyzivat wrote:
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
Review
Jim,
Sorry - I forgot to respond sooner.
Please see comments inline.
Thanks,
Paul
On 7/19/20 6:29 PM, Jim Schaad wrote:
-Original Message-
From: Paul Kyzivat
Sent: Sunday, July 19, 2020 1:24 PM
To: draft-ietf-ace-dtls-authorize@ietf.org
Cc: General Area Review
Brian,
On 7/12/20 6:40 PM, Brian Carpenter via Datatracker wrote:
Nits:
-
4.1. MSRP URI
transport /= "dc"
I see that RFC7977 takes a slightly different approach to updating the ABNF:
transport = "tcp" / "ws" / 1*ALPHANUM
The advantage of listing out
, please see the FAQ at
<http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
Document: draft-hodges-webauthn-registries-07
Reviewer: Paul Kyzivat
Review Date: 2020-05-15
IETF LC End Date: 2020-04-29
IESG Telechat date: 2020-05-19
Summary:
This draft is ready for publication as an Informa
tps://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
Document: draft-hodges-webauthn-registries-05
Reviewer: Paul Kyzivat
Review Date: 2020-04-13
IETF LC End Date: 2020-04-29
IESG Telechat date: ?
Summary:
This draft is on the right track but has open issues, described in the
review.
Issue: Additional re
, please see the FAQ at
<http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
Document: draft-spinosa-urn-lex-13
Reviewer: Paul Kyzivat
Review Date: 2020-02-18
IETF LC End Date: 2017-09-14
IESG Telechat date: 2020-02-18
Summary:
This draft is on the right track but has open issues, des
, please see the FAQ at
<http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
Document: draft-ietf-dots-architecture-16
Reviewer: Paul Kyzivat
Review Date: 2020-01-31
IETF LC End Date: 2019-01-31
IESG Telechat date: 2020-02-04
This draft is basically ready for publication, but ha
other last call comments.
For more information, please see the FAQ at
<https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
Document: draft-ietf-dots-architecture-15
Reviewer: Paul Kyzivat
Review Date: 2020-01-23
IETF LC End Date: 2020-01-27
tps://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
Document: draft-ietf-dots-architecture-15
Reviewer: Paul Kyzivat
Review Date: 2020-01-23
IETF LC End Date: 2020-01-27
IESG Telechat date: ?
Summary:
This draft is on the right track but has open issues, described in the
review.
General:
This is a ver
tps://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
Document: draft-boydseda-ipfix-psamp-bulk-data-yang-model-02
Reviewer: Paul Kyzivat
Review Date: 2019-12-16
IETF LC End Date: 2019-12-23
IESG Telechat date: (if known)
Summary:
This draft is on the right track but has open issues, described in the
tps://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
Document: draft-ietf-dmm-distributed-mobility-anchoring-13
Reviewer: Paul Kyzivat
Review Date: 2019-10-12
IETF LC End Date: 2019-10-14
IESG Telechat date: ?
Summary:
This draft is basically ready for publication, but has nits that should
be fixed
n't dawned on me that the linking issues were artifacts of the
automatic generation mechanism.
Thanks,
Paul
On 8/21/19 7:26 AM, Dhruv Dhody wrote:
Hi Paul,
Thanks for your review, please see inline...
On Tue, Aug 20, 2019 at 9:58 PM Paul Kyzivat wrote:
I am the assign
tps://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
Document: draft-ietf-pce-stateful-hpce-11
Reviewer: Paul Kyzivat
Review Date: 2019-08-20
IETF LC End Date: 2019-08-28
IESG Telechat date: ?
Summary:
This draft is basically ready for publication, but has nits that should
be fixed before publication.
tps://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
Document: draft-ietf-idr-bgp-extended-messages-33
Reviewer: Paul Kyzivat
Review Date: 2019-07-09
IETF LC End Date: 2019-07-18
IESG Telechat date: ?
Summary:
[This is a revision to the first version I sent out, that had a number
of mistakes.]
This
Randy,
On 7/4/19 2:28 PM, Randy Bush wrote:
paul,
thanks for the review. appreciated.
The Abstract and Introduction are written in the abstract, implying
(to me) that the requirements here are intended to be broadly
applicable for the stated purposes, over an extended period of
time. On the
tps://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
Document: draft-ietf-idr-bgp-extended-messages-33
Reviewer: Paul Kyzivat
Review Date: 2019-07-09
IETF LC End Date: 2019-07-18
IESG Telechat date: ?
Summary:
This draft is on the right track but has open issues, described in the
review.
Disclaimer:
I hav
ttp://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
Document: draft-ietf-netvc-requirements-09
Reviewer: Paul Kyzivat
Review Date: 2019-05-29
IETF LC End Date: 2019-06-04
IESG Telechat date: ?
Summary:
This draft is on the right track but has open issues, described in the
review.
Disclaimer:
On 4/10/19 1:23 PM, Joseph Lorenzo Hall wrote:
Thanks much for your review... responses inline:
On Wed, Mar 13, 2019 at 5:01 PM Paul Kyzivat <mailto:pkyzi...@alum.mit.edu>> wrote:
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
Review Team (Gen-ART) re
, please see the FAQ at
<http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
Document: draft-ietf-ccamp-rsvp-te-bandwidth-availability-14
Reviewer: Paul Kyzivat
Review Date: 2019-01-23
IETF LC End Date: 2019-01-31
IESG Telechat date: 2019-04-09
Summary:
This draft is on the right track b
ttp://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
Document: draft-ietf-iasa2-rfc4071bis-08
Reviewer: Paul Kyzivat
Review Date: 2019-03-13
IETF LC End Date: 2019-03-18
IESG Telechat date: ?
Summary:
This draft is basically ready for publication, but has nits that should
be fixed before publi
ext version. Thanks again.
BR,
Amy
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发件人: Paul Kyzivat [pkyzi...@alum.mit.edu]
发送时间: 2019年1月24日 2:28
收件人: draft-ietf-ccamp-rsvp-te-bandwidth-availability@ietf.org
抄送: General Area Review Team
主题: Gen-ART Last Call review of
draft-ietf-ccamp-rsvp-te-b
ttp://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
Document: draft-ietf-ccamp-rsvp-te-bandwidth-availability-13
Reviewer: Paul Kyzivat
Review Date: 2019-01-23
IETF LC End Date: 2019-01-31
IESG Telechat date: ?
Summary:
This draft is on the right track but has open issues, described in the
ttp://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
Document: draft-ietf-lsr-isis-rfc7810bis-03
Reviewer: Paul Kyzivat
Review Date: 2018-12-09
IETF LC End Date: 2018-12-12
IESG Telechat date: ?
Summary:
This draft is ready for publication as a Standards Track RFC.
Issues: None
It was ver
of the draft. For more
information, please see the FAQ at
<http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
Document: draft-ietf-ospf-segment-routing-msd-20
Reviewer: Paul Kyzivat
Review Date: 2018-09-14
IETF LC End Date: 2018-08-29
IESG Telechat date: 2018-09-25
Summary:
This
, please see the FAQ at
<http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
Document: draft-ietf-ospf-segment-routing-msd-20
Reviewer: Paul Kyzivat
Review Date: 2018-09-14
IETF LC End Date: 2018-08-29
IESG Telechat date: 2018-09-25
Summary:
This draft is basically ready for publi
On 8/28/18 1:30 PM, Jeff Tantsura wrote:
Hi Paul,
Many thanks!
I have uploaded .18 version that should address your comments.
Please let me know.
Looks good.
I forgot to run IdNits before, so I ran it now on -18. It is reporting
one warning:
== Outdated reference: A later version (-14)
think is the
right fix, if any.
Thanks,
Paul
Cheers,
Jeff
On 8/27/18, 12:50, "Paul Kyzivat" wrote:
Jeff,
On 8/27/18 2:18 PM, Jeff Tantsura wrote:
> 2) MINOR:
>
> Section 1 also says:
>
>
Jeff,
On 8/27/18 2:18 PM, Jeff Tantsura wrote:
2) MINOR:
Section 1 also says:
Although MSD
advertisements are associated with Segment Routing, the
advertisements MAY be present even if Segment Routing itself is not
enabled.
ttp://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
Document: draft-ietf-ospf-segment-routing-msd-17
Reviewer: Paul Kyzivat
Review Date: 2018-08-27
IETF LC End Date: 2018-08-29
IESG Telechat date: ?
Summary:
This draft is on the right track but has open issues, described in the
review.
Issues:
ttp://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
Document: draft-ietf-codec-ambisonics-07
Reviewer: Paul Kyzivat
Review Date: 2018-07-03
IETF LC End Date: 2018-07-10
IESG Telechat date: ?
Summary:
This draft is ready for publication as a Standards Track RFC.
I found the document to be in fine
On 6/4/18 5:39 AM, Gorry Fairhurst wrote:
The document write-up describes the process that has been used with SCTP
updates, and this document follows this plan - this is information to
help the WG prepare a bis document, that we plan to populate with these
edits to the spec and adopt as a WG
ttp://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
Document: draft-ietf-tsvwg-rfc4960-errata-06
Reviewer: Paul Kyzivat
Review Date: 2018-06-03
IETF LC End Date: 2018-06-04
IESG Telechat date: ?
Summary:
This draft is on the right track but has open issues, described in the
review.
Issues:
Ma
information, please see the FAQ at
<http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
Document: draft-ietf-tsvwg-rfc4960-errata-06
Reviewer: Paul Kyzivat
Review Date: 2018-06-03
IETF LC End Date: 2018-06-04
IESG Telechat date: ?
Summary:
This draft is on the right track but ha
of the draft. For more information, please see the FAQ at
<http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
Document: draft-ietf-tokbind-negotiation-12
Reviewer: Paul Kyzivat
Review Date: 2018-05-04
IETF LC End Date: 2017-11-27
IESG Telechat date: 2018-05-08
Summary:
This draft is
On 4/1/18 11:09 PM, Zhuangyan (Yan) wrote:
Hi Paul,
Thank you very much for your review and comments.
Some responses below.
Best Regards,
Yan
-Original Message-
From: Paul Kyzivat [mailto:pkyzi...@alum.mit.edu]
Sent: Sunday, April 01, 2018 1:20 AM
To: draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-dc-fabric
, please see the FAQ at
<http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
Document: draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-dc-fabric-network-topology-07
Reviewer: Paul Kyzivat
Review Date: 2018-03-31
IETF LC End Date: 2018-04-03
IESG Telechat date: 2018-04-05
Summary:
This draft is basically
ttp://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
Document: draft-ietf-lime-yang-connection-oriented-oam-model-05
Reviewer: Paul Kyzivat
Review Date: 2018-02-19
IETF LC End Date: 2018-02-19
IESG Telechat date: ?
Summary:
This draft is basically ready for publication, but has nits that should
be
, please see the FAQ at
<http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
Document: draft-ietf-opsawg-capwap-alt-tunnel-11
Reviewer: Paul Kyzivat
Review Date: 2018-01-20
IETF LC End Date: 2017-12-13
IESG Telechat date: 2018-01-23
Summary:
This draft is ready for publi
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