Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Telechat review of draft-ietf-mile-iodef-xmlreg-01.txt

2012-06-11 Thread Suresh Krishnan
On 06/06/2012 06:57 PM, Brian Trammell wrote: Hi, Suresh, Thanks for the comment; yes, this one is a bit hard to parse (even for me, and I tend to write page-length sentences). I've tweaked your suggested text somewhat and applied to the current working copy of the -02 revision. Thanks

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Telechat review of draft-ietf-mile-iodef-xmlreg-01.txt

2012-06-06 Thread Brian Trammell
Hi, Suresh, Thanks for the comment; yes, this one is a bit hard to parse (even for me, and I tend to write page-length sentences). I've tweaked your suggested text somewhat and applied to the current working copy of the -02 revision. Best regards, Brian On Jun 5, 2012, at 5:53 PM, Suresh