Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-taps-impl-15

2023-05-11 Thread Michael Welzl
> On May 11, 2023, at 3:49 PM, Dale R. Worley wrote: > > Michael Welzl writes: >>> On Apr 13, 2023, at 8:32 PM, Dale Worley via Datatracker >>> wrote: >>> So to fix this, I recommend that the authors go through the text >>> looking for modal words, [...] >> >> - that seems to be the right w

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-taps-impl-15

2023-05-11 Thread Dale R. Worley
Michael Welzl writes: >> On Apr 13, 2023, at 8:32 PM, Dale Worley via Datatracker >> wrote: >> So to fix this, I recommend that the authors go through the text >> looking for modal words, [...] > > - that seems to be the right way to approach this. It is a very good > suggestion, many thanks. In

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-taps-impl-15

2023-05-09 Thread Michael Welzl
Dear Dale, Many thanks for this very thoughtful review! (and sorry for the delay) I’ll give some answers below, as an author of the -impl and an editor of the -interface document - I hope my co-authors will agree with me, or comment if they do not. > On Apr 13, 2023, at 8:32 PM, Dale Worley v

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-taps-impl-15

2023-04-13 Thread Dale Worley via Datatracker
Reviewer: Dale Worley Review result: Ready with Issues I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more