Re: [Gen-art] gen-art IETF LC Review: draft-ietf-mipshop-4140bis-02.txt

2008-04-21 Thread Joel M. Halpern
Thanks for the prompt reply. One comment in line, confirming your reading. Joel Hesham Soliman wrote: > Thank you for your comments. > ... >> >> The section on detecting MAP failures could use improvement. I >> realize that this is the same text as was in RFC 4140. However, it >> seems

Re: [Gen-art] gen-art IETF LC Review: draft-ietf-mipshop-4140bis-02.txt

2008-04-21 Thread Hesham Soliman
Thank you for your comments. > Summary: Almost ready for publication as a proposed standard. > > Comments: > Significant: > As I read this protocol, if a Home Agent is beign used, then > packets arriving at the MAP from the Home Agent will be tunneled, > with the original packet inside a

Re: [Gen-art] gen-art IETF LC Review: draft-ietf-mipshop-4140bis-02.txt

2008-04-19 Thread Joel M. Halpern
I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html ). Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: Hierarchical