Re: [Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-ecrit-additional-data-34.txt

2015-09-16 Thread Randall Gellens
I've addressed all of Francis' comments (which I appreciate) and also reviewed all lowercase instances of the key words. At 2:03 PM +0200 9/3/15, Jari Arkko wrote: Thanks for your review, Francis! Can the authors check the comments? Thanks. With regards to RFC 2119 keywords, if I understa

Re: [Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-ecrit-additional-data-34.txt

2015-09-16 Thread Randall Gellens
Hi Francis, Thanks for your review. Please see in-line. At 12:19 PM +0200 9/2/15, Francis Dupont wrote: I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these c

Re: [Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-ecrit-additional-data-34.txt

2015-09-03 Thread Jari Arkko
Thanks for your review, Francis! Can the authors check the comments? Thanks. With regards to RFC 2119 keywords, if I understand the point correctly, I wouldn’t worry too much about the appearance of lower case keywords, if they indeed are meant to be just English and not keywords. That is the cur

[Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-ecrit-additional-data-34.txt

2015-09-02 Thread Francis Dupont
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