Re: [I2nsf] AD Review of draft-ietf-i2nsf-capability-data-model-05

2020-08-25 Thread Mr. Jaehoon Paul Jeong
t; > > > *From:* Mr. Jaehoon Paul Jeong > *Sent:* Tuesday, August 25, 2020 1:08 PM > *To:* Roman Danyliw > *Cc:* i2nsf@ietf.org; skku-iotlab-members < > skku-iotlab-memb...@googlegroups.com>; Susan Hares ; Mr. > Jaehoon Paul Jeong > *Subject:* Re: [I2nsf] AD Review

Re: [I2nsf] AD Review of draft-ietf-i2nsf-capability-data-model-05

2020-08-25 Thread Roman Danyliw
: [I2nsf] AD Review of draft-ietf-i2nsf-capability-data-model-05 Roman, I have used option (3) by adding rudimentary text for each leaf for advanced-nsf-capabilities. I have also replaced "whitelists" with "allow-list". Here is the revision: https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-i

Re: [I2nsf] AD Review of draft-ietf-i2nsf-capability-data-model-05

2020-08-25 Thread Mr. Jaehoon Paul Jeong
Functions - Advanced NSF Anti-Virus Allow List capability"; > > } > > > > Regards, > > Roman > > > > *From:* I2nsf *On Behalf Of * Mr. Jaehoon Paul > Jeong > *Sent:* Tuesday, August 25, 2020 8:18 AM > *To:* Roman Danyliw > *Cc:* i2nsf@ietf.org;

Re: [I2nsf] AD Review of draft-ietf-i2nsf-capability-data-model-05

2020-08-25 Thread Roman Danyliw
capability"; } Regards, Roman From: I2nsf On Behalf Of Mr. Jaehoon Paul Jeong Sent: Tuesday, August 25, 2020 8:18 AM To: Roman Danyliw Cc: i2nsf@ietf.org; skku-iotlab-members ; Mr. Jaehoon Paul Jeong ; Susan Hares Subject: Re: [I2nsf] AD Review of draft-ietf-i2nsf-capability-data-model

Re: [I2nsf] AD Review of draft-ietf-i2nsf-capability-data-model-05

2020-08-25 Thread Mr. Jaehoon Paul Jeong
future enhancements (as > proposed by draft-dong-i2nsf-asf-config). What does everyone else think? > > > > Regards, > > Roman > > > > > > > > *From:* Mr. Jaehoon Paul Jeong > *Sent:* Monday, July 13, 2020 9:04 AM > *To:* Roman Danyliw

Re: [I2nsf] AD Review of draft-ietf-i2nsf-capability-data-model-05

2020-08-24 Thread Roman Danyliw
: [I2nsf] AD Review of draft-ietf-i2nsf-capability-data-model-05 Hi Roman, No problem. I will address your further comments this week. For draft-dong-i2nsf-asf-config, I prefer option (a), that is, removing the references to the capabilities from draft-dong-i2nsf-asf-config. Thanks for your

Re: [I2nsf] AD Review of draft-ietf-i2nsf-capability-data-model-05

2020-08-24 Thread Mr. Jaehoon Paul Jeong
-dong-i2nsf-asf-config). What does everyone else think? > > > > Regards, > > Roman > > > > > > > > *From:* Mr. Jaehoon Paul Jeong > *Sent:* Monday, July 13, 2020 9:04 AM > *To:* Roman Danyliw > *Cc:* i2nsf@ietf.org; Susan Hares ; skku-iotlab-

Re: [I2nsf] AD Review of draft-ietf-i2nsf-capability-data-model-05

2020-08-24 Thread Roman Danyliw
i2nsf@ietf.org; Susan Hares ; skku-iotlab-members ; Mr. Jaehoon Paul Jeong Subject: Re: [I2nsf] AD Review of draft-ietf-i2nsf-capability-data-model-05 Hi Roman, I (as an editor) have revised the I2NSF Capability Data Model Draft and posted it into the IETF repository: https://tools.ietf.org/html/

Re: [I2nsf] AD Review of draft-ietf-i2nsf-capability-data-model-05

2020-08-09 Thread Mr. Jaehoon Paul Jeong
Hi Roman, Could you check my revision on I2NSF Capability YANG Data Model and let me know if there are further comments? Thanks. Best Regards, Paul On Mon, Jul 13, 2020 at 10:03 PM Mr. Jaehoon Paul Jeong < jaehoon.p...@gmail.com> wrote: > Hi Roman, > I (as an editor) have revised the I2NSF Capa

Re: [I2nsf] AD Review of draft-ietf-i2nsf-capability-data-model-05

2020-05-12 Thread Mr. Jaehoon Paul Jeong
Hi Roman, I will reflect your comments on the revision. Thanks. Best Regards, Paul On Wed, May 13, 2020 at 7:11 AM Roman Danyliw wrote: > Hi! > > I conducted an AD review of draft-ietf-i2nsf-capability-data-model-05. > Thanks for the work in getting this document written. My most significant

[I2nsf] AD Review of draft-ietf-i2nsf-capability-data-model-05

2020-05-12 Thread Roman Danyliw
Hi! I conducted an AD review of draft-ietf-i2nsf-capability-data-model-05. Thanks for the work in getting this document written. My most significant items are around aligning of the text in Section 4 with RFC8329 and the dependency on draft-dong-i2nsf-asf-config-01. My detailed feedback is b