RE: Last Call: draft-ietf-pim-bidir (Bi-directional Protocol Independent Multicast (BIDIR-PIM)) to Proposed Standard

2007-02-07 Thread Romascanu, Dan \(Dan\)
1. The document should list 'Intended Status: Proposed Standard' in the header 2. The document lacks an IANA consideration section. Moreover the allocation of OptionType 22 in section 3.7.4 contradicts section 4.9.2 in RFC 4601 which states: 'OptionTypes 17 through 65000 are assigned by the

RE: [Hubmib] Last Call: draft-ietf-hubmib-efm-mib (Definitions and Managed Objects for OAM Functions on Ethernet Like Interfaces) to Proposed Standard

2007-02-07 Thread Romascanu, Dan \(Dan\)
1. The header of the document should include: 'Intended Status - Proposed Standard' 2. References problems: - Unused Reference: 'RFC2586' is defined on line 2715, but not referenced '[RFC2586] Bierman, A., McCloghrie, K., Presuhn, R., Textual Convent...' - Unused Reference: 'RFC3636' is

Gen-ART Last Call Review of draft-ietf-avt-hc-over-mpls-protocol-07

2007-02-07 Thread Spencer Dawkins
I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html). Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document:

RE: ietf-moms

2007-02-07 Thread David Harrington
Is there any IPR that needs to be disclosed related to such a list? dbh -Original Message- From: Harald Tveit Alvestrand [mailto:[EMAIL PROTECTED] Sent: Friday, February 02, 2007 10:55 AM To: Steven M. Bellovin; Dave Cridland Cc: Dave Aronson; IETF-Discussion Subject: Re:

Re: Last Call: draft-iesg-sponsoring-guidelines (Guidance on Area Director Sponsoring of Documents) to Informational RFC

2007-02-07 Thread Jeffrey Hutzelman
On Wednesday, February 07, 2007 10:20:54 AM -0500 The IESG [EMAIL PROTECTED] wrote: The IESG has received a request from the Internet Engineering Steering Group (iesg) to consider the following document: - 'Guidance on Area Director Sponsoring of Documents '

Re: Last Call: draft-iesg-sponsoring-guidelines (Guidance on Area Director Sponsoring of Documents) to Informational RFC

2007-02-07 Thread Spencer Dawkins
And we should ask this question every time we see an informational process RFC last call... The best reason to publish a process document as an RFC is because it will be a BCP (IONs aren't BCPs). Since this one won't be a BCP, and given that guidance could change over time, I'd think an ION

Re: Last Call: draft-iesg-sponsoring-guidelines (Guidance on Area Director Sponsoring of Documents) to Informational RFC

2007-02-07 Thread John C Klensin
Hi. I will get to substance in a separate note, and hope others will also. In the interim, two procedural remarks... (1) This document and draft-klensin-rfc-independent-05.txt describe two pieces of the how a document that does not originate in a WG may be reviewed and published space. Each

Re: Last Call: draft-iesg-sponsoring-guidelines (Guidance on Area Director Sponsoring of Documents) to Informational RFC

2007-02-07 Thread Frank Ellermann
John C Klensin wrote: If the IESG intends this document to merely represent the particular procedures they intend to follow within the range of alternatives over which they believe they have discretion, then it should probably be published as an ION Not publishing it at all is an

Re: [secdir] Secdir review comments for draft-ietf-pim-bidir-08

2007-02-07 Thread Steven M. Bellovin
On Wed, 7 Feb 2007 21:14:35 -0800 Joseph Salowey (jsalowey) [EMAIL PROTECTED] wrote: I would like to understand better why ... no automated key management is specified. Do they cite any of the reasons listed in RFC 4107? --Steve Bellovin, http://www.cs.columbia.edu/~smb

Secdir review comments for draft-ietf-pim-bidir-08

2007-02-07 Thread Joseph Salowey \(jsalowey\)
I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG. These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the security area directors. Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just like

RE: [secdir] Secdir review comments for draft-ietf-pim-bidir-08

2007-02-07 Thread Joseph Salowey \(jsalowey\)
-Original Message- From: Steven M. Bellovin [mailto:[EMAIL PROTECTED] Sent: Wednesday, February 07, 2007 9:21 PM To: Joseph Salowey (jsalowey) Cc: iesg@ietf.org; [EMAIL PROTECTED]; [EMAIL PROTECTED]; Isidor Kouvelas (kouvelas); Tony Speakman (speakman); [EMAIL PROTECTED]; [EMAIL

Protocol Action: 'Extended ICMP to Support Multi-part Messages' to Proposed Standard

2007-02-07 Thread The IESG
The IESG has approved the following document: - 'Extended ICMP to Support Multi-part Messages ' draft-bonica-internet-icmp-16.txt as a Proposed Standard This document has been reviewed in the IETF but is not the product of an IETF Working Group. The IESG contact person is Jari Arkko. A URL

Last Call: draft-iesg-sponsoring-guidelines (Guidance on Area Director Sponsoring of Documents) to Informational RFC

2007-02-07 Thread The IESG
The IESG has received a request from the Internet Engineering Steering Group (iesg) to consider the following document: - 'Guidance on Area Director Sponsoring of Documents ' draft-iesg-sponsoring-guidelines-01.txt as an Informational RFC The IESG plans to make a decision in the next few

Last Call: draft-ietf-crisp-iris-dchk (A Domain Availability Check (dchk) Registry Type for the Internet Registry Information Service (IRIS)) to Proposed Standard

2007-02-07 Thread The IESG
The IESG has received a request from the Cross Registry Information Service Protocol WG (crisp) to consider the following document: - 'A Domain Availability Check (dchk) Registry Type for the Internet Registry Information Service (IRIS) ' draft-ietf-crisp-iris-dchk-06.txt as a Proposed

RFC 4651 on A Taxonomy and Analysis of Enhancements to Mobile IPv6 Route Optimization

2007-02-07 Thread rfc-editor
A new Request for Comments is now available in online RFC libraries. RFC 4651 Title: A Taxonomy and Analysis of Enhancements to Mobile IPv6 Route Optimization Author: C. Vogt, J. Arkko Status: Informational