Re: [IPsec] AD review: draft-ietf-ipsecme-ipsec-ha

2010-06-10 Thread Yoav Nir
Hi Sean. I have just submitted version -05 which addresses most (but not all) of your comments. Here's a list of the exceptions (hope I didn't miss any) #2. I've worded the abstract a little differently. Main difference is adding to gaps in existing standards the words and their

Re: [IPsec] AD review: draft-ietf-ipsecme-ipsec-ha

2010-06-10 Thread Sean Turner
Yoav Nir wrote: Hi Sean. I have just submitted version -05 which addresses most (but not all) of your comments. Here's a list of the exceptions (hope I didn't miss any) #2. I've worded the abstract a little differently. Main difference is adding to gaps in existing standards the words and

Re: [IPsec] AD review: draft-ietf-ipsecme-ipsec-ha

2010-06-10 Thread Yoav Nir
On Jun 10, 2010, at 6:39 PM, Sean Turner wrote: Yoav Nir wrote: #13, #15, a few more (no MUST/SHOULD/MAY language). I have two issues with this. The first, is that this document is a problem statement, and intended to be INFORMATIONAL. No gateway is ever going to be said to implement

Re: [IPsec] AD review: draft-ietf-ipsecme-ipsec-ha

2010-06-10 Thread Sean Turner
Yoav Nir wrote: On Jun 10, 2010, at 6:39 PM, Sean Turner wrote: Yoav Nir wrote: #13, #15, a few more (no MUST/SHOULD/MAY language). I have two issues with this. The first, is that this document is a problem statement, and intended to be INFORMATIONAL. No gateway is ever going to be said to

Re: [IPsec] AD review: draft-ietf-ipsecme-ipsec-ha

2010-06-10 Thread Yoav Nir
Done in -06 On Jun 10, 2010, at 7:17 PM, Sean Turner wrote: Yoav Nir wrote: On Jun 10, 2010, at 6:39 PM, Sean Turner wrote: Yoav Nir wrote: #13, #15, a few more (no MUST/SHOULD/MAY language). I have two issues with this. The first, is that this document is a problem statement, and

[IPsec] AD review: draft-ietf-ipsecme-ipsec-ha

2010-06-08 Thread Sean Turner
Yaron asked me to review draft-ietf-ipsecme-ipsec-ha on 2010-06-01. Here are my comments most of which are about clarifying text (so that readers who didn't participate in the WG discussions can understand this unambiguously), plus a couple of nits. Yoav, could you post a new version that