[Lsr] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-lsr-ospf-bfd-strict-mode-07

2022-09-09 Thread Russ Housley via Datatracker
Reviewer: Russ Housley Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

Re: [Lsr] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-lsr-isis-rfc5306bis-04

2019-08-16 Thread Russ Housley
>> Nits: >> >> Section 3.2.3: The lettered paragraphs at the top of the section >> begin with lower case letters, but the lettered paragraphs at the >> top of the section begin with upper case letters. Please be >> consistent. >> > [Les:] Done Cool. >> Section 3.2.3: s/time after which the adj

[Lsr] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-lsr-isis-rfc5306bis-04

2019-08-15 Thread Russ Housley via Datatracker
Reviewer: Russ Housley Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more