Re: [OPSAWG] IoT-DIR early review of draft-ietf-opsawg-mud-08

2017-08-30 Thread Eliot Lear
Hi Henk and thanks very much for your review. Please see below. On 8/29/17 11:40 PM, Henk Birkholz wrote: > > > # IoT-DIR Early Review of I-D.ietf-opsawg-mud-08 > > ## Draft Summary > > This draft defines a canonical way to compose an URI that points to a > specific resource called a MUD file. A

Re: [OPSAWG] IoT-DIR early review of draft-ietf-opsawg-mud-08

2017-08-30 Thread Henk Birkholz
Hello Eliot, thank you for your fast feedback! I still have some comments and questions for another round, though. I hope that is okay - please see comments in-line. Viele Grüße, Henk On 08/30/2017 09:56 AM, Eliot Lear wrote: Hi Henk and thanks very much for your review. Please see below

[OPSAWG] Genart early review of draft-ietf-opsawg-mud-08

2017-08-30 Thread Robert Sparks
Reviewer: Robert Sparks Review result: Almost Ready This is an exciting concept, and the draft overall is approachable. I have identified a few areas I think need more detail, and have a longish list of nits (please don't take that to be negative). ==Issues== I find the structure of the introdu

Re: [OPSAWG] Genart early review of draft-ietf-opsawg-mud-08

2017-08-30 Thread M. Ranganathan
On Wed, Aug 30, 2017 at 1:21 PM, Robert Sparks wrote: > > > Right now, you leave the DHCP server (when it's used) responsible for > clearing state in the MUD controller. Please discuss what happens when > those are distinct elements (as you have in the end of section 9.2) and > the DHCP server re

Re: [OPSAWG] Genart early review of draft-ietf-opsawg-mud-08

2017-08-30 Thread M. Ranganathan
On Wed, Aug 30, 2017 at 6:00 PM, M. Ranganathan wrote: > > > On Wed, Aug 30, 2017 at 1:21 PM, Robert Sparks > wrote: > >> >> >> Right now, you leave the DHCP server (when it's used) responsible for >> clearing state in the MUD controller. Please discuss what happens when >> those are distinct el

Re: [OPSAWG] [Gen-art] Genart early review of draft-ietf-opsawg-mud-08

2017-08-30 Thread Dale R. Worley
This draft raises some fascinating questions. One is "How do we ensure that the manufacturer cannot proscribe the uses of a device that it is capable of and that its purchaser desires?" Another is "How do we ensure that the manufacturer cannot reduce the permitted uses of the device after its pur