[OPSAWG] I-D Action: draft-ietf-opsawg-sbom-access-05.txt

2022-03-06 Thread internet-drafts
A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories. This draft is a work item of the Operations and Management Area Working Group WG of the IETF. Title : Discovering and Retrieving Software Transparency and Vulnerability Information Authors

Re: [OPSAWG] I-D Action: draft-ietf-opsawg-sbom-access-05.txt

2022-03-06 Thread Eliot Lear
Good morning, good afternoon, and good evening to all, This update really has only two changes in it from the last time, and should be ready for WGLC: 1. An attempt is made to format the Security Considerations section in line with the requirements for YANG models.  Thanks to Tom Petch (

Re: [OPSAWG] I-D Action: draft-ietf-opsawg-tlstm-update-01.txt

2022-03-06 Thread Kenneth Vaughn
This draft responds to the various comments received to date. The big changes are as follows: 1. It proposes the creation of a new registry, which will initially be identical to the TLS 1.2 Hashing Algorithm Identifier Table but will be separate so that we can add new rows as needed to support f

Re: [OPSAWG] WG LC: A YANG Model for Network and VPN Service Performance Monitoring

2022-03-06 Thread Adrian Farrel
Hi, I reviewed this draft at -01 [1]. The authors proposed acceptable changes, and these have appeared in the subsequent revisions. As part of WG last call, I have done another quick review. Asides from a few trivial nits (below), I think this draft is ready for publication. Thanks, Adrian [1]

Re: [OPSAWG] I-D Action: draft-ietf-opsawg-tlstm-update-01.txt

2022-03-06 Thread Andy Donati
Hi Kenneth, Thank you for the 01 draft. Here are a few review items. Item 1: The Description clause for the SnmpTLSFingerprint TEXTUAL-CONVENTION has the word obsolete in quotes i.e., "obsolete" in line 185. It is suggested that the quotes around the word obsolete be removed as it can be confu

[OPSAWG] Secdir early review of draft-ietf-opsawg-mud-iot-dns-considerations-03

2022-03-06 Thread Christopher Wood via Datatracker
Reviewer: Christopher Wood Review result: Not Ready Reviewer: Christopher Wood Review result: Has issues General comments: In general, the problem statement and motivation for this draft -- and the techniques in Section 3 in particular -- seems underspecified. For example, what are the requireme

Re: [OPSAWG] [secdir] Secdir early review of draft-ietf-opsawg-mud-iot-dns-considerations-03

2022-03-06 Thread Christopher Wood
Oops. I manually entered the review result in the datatracker form. The intended review result is “Not Ready." > On Mar 6, 2022, at 4:21 PM, Christopher Wood via Datatracker > wrote: > > Reviewer: Christopher Wood > Review result: Not Ready > > Reviewer: Christopher Wood > Review result: Has