Re: [OPSAWG] [mpls] New I-D -> Guidelines for Charactering "OAM" -review

2024-01-19 Thread loa
OPSAWG participants, Carlos, Adrian and Greg. As one of the co-authors RFC 6291 I agree that it makes sense to update RFC 6291 in this way. In part, this draft is very close to what Greg and I tried to say in a mail that we sent to some wg's. We saw a DETNET/RAW document that used the acronyms iO

[OPSAWG] AD review draft-ietf-opsawg-mud-tls-12

2024-01-19 Thread Paul Wouters
Hi, I am assisting Rob Wilton with some documents, as so I am the (temporary) responsible AD for draft-ietf-opsawg-mud-tls I have reviewed this document and have a few questions and comments. I think the document generally is clear. I can see the MUD use case for using endpoint recognition based

Re: [OPSAWG] [IPFIX] WG LC: IPFIX documents

2024-01-19 Thread Aitken, Paul
https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-ietf-opsawg-tsvwg-udp-ipfix-06.txt 1. Introduction A brief overview of UDP option is provided in Section 3. Typo, "UDP options" (plural). The IE specified in Section 4.1 uses the new abstract data type defined in [I-D.ietf-opsawg-ipfix-tcpo

Re: [OPSAWG] [IPFIX] WG LC: IPFIX documents

2024-01-19 Thread Aitken, Paul
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-tcpo-v6eh Essentially the middle of this document is missing: a summary of issues is given and new IEs are proposed as a solution. But the issues are not developed or explained. 1.1. Issues with ipv6ExtensionHeaders Information Elem

Re: [OPSAWG] AD review of draft-ietf-opsawg-9092-update-08

2024-01-19 Thread Rob Wilton (rwilton)
Hi Randy, Please see inline … From: Randy Bush Date: Thursday, 18 January 2024 at 19:45 To: Rob Wilton (rwilton) Cc: draft-ietf-opsawg-9092-update@ietf.org , Mahesh Jethanandani , Ops Area WG Subject: Re: AD review of draft-ietf-opsawg-9092-update-08 hi rob, thanks for review. apprecia