[trill] Shepherd's review Review of draft-ietf-trill-rfc6439bis-02.txt

2016-08-10 Thread Susan Hares
Status: Ready to publish Concerns: None Editorial nits: Section 2.2.1 - paragraph 6 sentence starting with /should the VLANs - it would help if the sentence was broken into to sentences. Section 4.0 - 4th paragraph - in the 1st numbered sub-paragraph - the sentence starting with /This

Re: [trill] Shepherd's review Review of draft-ietf-trill-rfc6439bis-02.txt

2016-08-10 Thread Susan Hares
Trill WG: I missed one other editorial change for RFC6439bis-02.txt. RFC7180 has been obsoleted by RFC7780. This needs to be changed. Sue From: trill [mailto:trill-boun...@ietf.org] On Behalf Of Susan Hares Sent: Wednesday, August 10, 2016 3:18 PM To: trill@ietf.org Cc: 'Donald

[trill] Shepherd review of draft-ietf-trill-mtu-negotiations-04.txt

2016-08-10 Thread Susan Hares
Status of draft: Ready for publication, a few editorial nits Concerns: None WG Request/Reminder: We'll need to make sure these parameters update the TRILL Yang data model. Editorial NITs: 1. Section 2 Page 5, before first paragraph The text would be clear if pri

Re: [trill] Shepherd's review Review of draft-ietf-trill-rfc6439bis-02.txt

2016-08-10 Thread Donald Eastlake
Hi Sue, On Wed, Aug 10, 2016 at 3:30 PM, Susan Hares wrote: > Trill WG: > > I missed one other editorial change for RFC6439bis-02.txt. > > RFC7180 has been obsoleted by RFC7780. This needs to be changed. Well, the only reference to RFC 7180 is in Appendix B where it is, in fact, talking about R

Re: [trill] Shepherd review of draft-ietf-trill-mtu-negotiations-04.txt

2016-08-10 Thread Mingui Zhang
Hi Sue, Thanks for the comments! Please take a look at my responses inline. From: Susan Hares [mailto:sha...@ndzh.com] Sent: Thursday, August 11, 2016 4:15 AM To: trill@ietf.org Cc: draft-ietf-trill-mtu-negotiat...@ietf.org; Mingui Zhang; 'Donald Eastlake'; somnath.chatterje...@gmail.com; ra...@