[Bug 62359] Re: Some more typos

2006-09-29 Thread Michael Vogt
** Changed in: gnome-app-install (Ubuntu) Status: Fix Committed => Fix Released -- Some more typos https://launchpad.net/bugs/62359 -- ubuntu-bugs mailing list ubuntu-bugs@lists.ubuntu.com https://lists.ubuntu.com/mailman/listinfo/ubuntu-bugs

[Bug 62359] Re: Some more typos

2006-09-26 Thread Sebastian Heinlein
"this application ... remove applications" sound repetitive too. Furthermore the name of the menu item ist "add/remove ...", so I think, that we could skip this sentence. Since GNOME decided to use the term application primarly, we should do so too. Take a look at the panel menu. The main menu is

[Bug 62359] Re: Some more typos

2006-09-26 Thread Yan
Sorry, after re-reading that the phrase sounds repetitive. Try: """ This application allows you to add or remove applications. Ubuntu and third party vendors offer you a large variety of applications that you can install on your system. """ Is this supposed to be feel good blurb or a dialog th

[Bug 62359] Re: Some more typos

2006-09-26 Thread Yan
I agree that 'packages' is a technical term and that the following message is more clear: """ This application allows you to add or remove a large variety of applications. Ubuntu and third party vendors offer you a large variety of applications that you can install on your system. """ In the s

[Bug 62359] Re: Some more typos

2006-09-26 Thread Sebastian Heinlein
Packages is a technical term that should be avoided in gnome-app- install. "Ubuntu and third party vendors offer you a large variety of applications to choose from." or "Ubuntu and third party vendors offer you a large variety of applications that you can install on your system." Comments, Yan?

[Bug 62359] Re: Some more typos

2006-09-26 Thread Michael Vogt
Thanks for your bugreport. I changed that text (as suggested) to: """ This application allows you to add or remove a large variety of applications. Application packages are provided by Ubuntu or third parties. """ ** Changed in: gnome-app-install (Ubuntu) Importance: Undecided => Medium

[Bug 62359] Re: Some more typos

2006-09-25 Thread Yan
** Attachment added: "Screen shot of "Checking installed and available applications" dialog" http://librarian.launchpad.net/4440838/Screenshot.png -- Some more typos https://launchpad.net/bugs/62359 -- ubuntu-bugs mailing list ubuntu-bugs@lists.ubuntu.com https://lists.ubuntu.com/mailman/l