Hi Max,

Thanks for reviewing the webrev, below is another updated webrev which contains fixes for all your comments, please let me know if you have any other suggestions.
http://cr.openjdk.java.net/~amjiang/8048357/webrev.03/

Thanks,
Amanda

On 15/11/15 下午11:41, Wang Weijun wrote:
Why "othervm" for all these tests?

PKCS10AttrOrder.java:

- Is sun.security.provider and sun.misc used anywhere? You have them in 
@modules.

- sun.security.pkcs.PKCS9Attribute contains public constants like 
CONTENT_TYPE_OID, SIGNING_TIME_OID, CHALLENGE_PASSWORD_OID. You can directly 
use them. Same as PKCS10AttributeReader.java.

- What does "order" mean in the test name? PKCS10 Attributes is a Set, 
therefore there is no order.

- You print out "List of attributes in constructed PKCS10 request: " but I see 
no content.

- checkAttributes() ensures every attribute in the encoded PKCS10 has the 
correct value. But you haven't checked if all entries in constructedMap are 
encoded. Maybe compare the size?

PKCS10AttributeReader.java:

- sun.misc in @modules?

- Line 45: .asn1 -> asn.1

- Please also compare the size of RequestStander and eReq.

PKCS8Test.java:

- sun.security.x509 in @modules?
This test uses "sun.misc.HexDumpEncoder", so that's why security.x509 is in @modules.

- Line 206: Dump encodedKey here? Seems too late. Why not do it before the 
check or at least before raiseException? Same with the other 4 debug outputs 
after raiseException.

- EXPECTED_ALG_ID_CHRS can be just a String with \n and \t inside.

pkcs7/*.java:

Please take a look at Bernd Eckenfels's comments on Aug 21. I fully agree with 
him.

Thanks
Max

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On Nov 13, 2015, at 4:57 PM, Amanda Jiang <amanda.ji...@oracle.com> wrote:

Hi Max,

Please check the updated webrev which address your comments, please let me know 
if you have any other suggestions.
http://cr.openjdk.java.net/~amjiang/8048357/webrev.02/

Thanks,
Amanda

On 15/8/21 上午12:13, Weijun Wang wrote:
PKCS10AttrOrder.java:

- Why not inline revAttributes(), prov() and constructMap()? They are only used 
once. Putting the content into the main method is more clear.

- You can create separate method for the while look checks. The 2 look 
identical.

PKCS10AttributeReader.java:

- Is it OK to indent the data in the comment to multiple levels?

- Again, initMap() not necessary.

PKCS7VerifyTest.java:

- Not sure what this is for. The 1st and 2nd argument of the @run line are the 
same?
those 3 arguments are actually for two different test cases, I use two @run 
tags in updated webrev and add some comments in test to make it clear.
SignerOrder.java:

- Comment on what derString1 and derString1 are.

- What do you expect verifs1.length and verifs2.length to be? Will you also 
check it?
Yes I do check verifs1.length and verifs2.length should be same.
  121         if (verifs1.length != verifs2.length) {
  122             throw new RuntimeException("Length or Original vs read-in "
  123                     + "should be same");
  124         }



PKCS8Test.java:

- Typo: s/recieved/received/g

Thanks
Max

On 08/21/2015 07:11 AM, Amanda Jiang wrote:
Hi All,

Please be free to review new tests for conformance testing of PKCS.

bug: https://bugs.openjdk.java.net/browse/JDK-8048357
webrev: http://cr.openjdk.java.net/~amjiang/8048357/webrev.01/

Thanks,
Amanda


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