Hi Paul,
        
Done the following changes and uploaded webrev at :

http://cr.opensolaris.org/~vivekrt/6816371-antlr/

Changes :

1. usr/src/lib/antlr/METADATA
   a) Changed OWNER to Dipesh.Hadye at SUN.com.
   b)   'java-classes' in BUGTRAQ is correct.

2. usr/src/lib/antlr/install-sfw
   a) Changed the top-of-file.
   b) Removed VER=3.0 .
   c) Added  '$ set -o errexit'
  
3. usr/src/lib/antlr/sunman/antlr.3
   a)Removed the symbolic link.
   b)Removed reference to old version doc.      

4. usr/src/pkgdefs/SUNWantlr/pkginfo.tmpl
   a) Removed brackets "()" from the NAME line.


Thanks and Regards,
Dipesh Hadye


-----Original Message-----
From: Paul Cunningham [mailto:[email protected]] 
Sent: Tuesday, April 28, 2009 1:18 PM
To: Dipesh Hadye
Cc: sfwnv-discuss at opensolaris.org
Subject: Re: [sfwnv-discuss] Request code review for "antlr"

Dipesh,

See comments below ...

Paul

Dipesh Hadye wrote:
> I have posted a webrev for package "antlr" which I am porting to 
> OpenSolaris and would like to request a code review. 
> Please see below link
> http://cr.opensolaris.org/~vivekrt/6816371-antlr/

1. usr/src/lib/antlr/METADATA
    Change OWNER: to you

    Just checking: on the BUGTRAQ: line, is 'java-classes' correct?

2. usr/src/lib/antlr/install-sfw
    Cosmetic: change top-of-file so it conforms to that in ..
"http://src.opensolaris.org/source/xref/onnv/onnv-gate/usr/src/prototypes/";

    Copyright year is wrong.

    Line ...
     27 VER=3.0
    is not used so remove

    Add a '$ set -o errexit' after header, as in ...
"http://cr.opensolaris.org/~vivekrt/6816372-Stringtemplate/usr/src/lib/strin
gtemplate/install-sfw.html"

3. usr/src/lib/antlr/sunman/antlr.3
    Line ..
     41 /usr/share/lib/java/antlr.jar -> antlr-3.0.jar (sym link)
    do you need to refer to antlr-3.0.jar? You will have to
    change this for every source version update if you do.

    Line ...
     69 .B file:/usr/share/lib/java/javadoc/antlr277/index.html
    why the reference to this old version.

4. usr/src/pkgdefs/SUNWantlr/pkginfo.tmpl
    Cosmetic: Line ..
     34 NAME="antlr - (AN)other (T)ool for (L)anguage (R)ecognition"
    it might be nicer to leave of the brackets () on the NAME line

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