Raymond,

Mainly looks good to me from my quick review. See minor comments below ...

Paul

Raymond Xiong wrote:
> Can anyone help to review my code for Erlang/OTP integration?
> 
>    http://cr.opensolaris.org/~rayx/erlang/webrev/
> 
> Here is its ARC material: 
> 
>    
> http://opensolaris.org/os/community/arc/caselog/2008/210/materials/final-spec-txt/
> 
> The code is based on Rahul's original code for CCD integration,
> but I made some changes(Rahul and Jim has kindly reviewed some
> of those changes). 
> 
> Note: I knew of Targetdirs usage from recent discussion on this
> alias, and I have changed my code to use it. But I just use
> Targetdirs to create top-level directories and doesn' list all
> of subdirs(because there are too many), I suppose that's OK.
> 

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1. usr/src/cmd/erlang/Makefile.sfw
    Could you have used the a default --prefix and --mandir are set in
    Makefile.master ? See comment in 
http://cr.opensolaris.org/~jacobs/2008-03-21-sfwnv-cups/usr/src/cmd/cups/Makefile.sfw.html

2. usr/src/pkgdefs/SUNWerlang-doc/depend
    Does this really depend on SUNWerlang? After all its only
    documentation which you could have installed without the
    binary stuff! (Just a thought)

3. usr/src/cmd/erlang/postinstall-sfw
    Saw your comment above - but I would say the dirs should be in
    Targetdirs.

4. usr/src/pkgdefs/SUNW*/copyright
    Just my normal comment about the length of the 'copyright' files :-(
    Have noticed lately, in reviews, that some people are using
    the short version. (Ignore if you so wish)

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Paul Cunningham
Software Engineer
Tadpole Computer Products

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