Bruce,

See below for my comments from my *quick* skip through ...

Paul

> -----Original Message-----
> From: sfwnv-discuss-bounces at opensolaris.org [mailto:sfwnv-discuss-
> bounces at opensolaris.org] On Behalf Of Bruce Rothermal
> Sent: 23 June 2008 23:42
> To: sfwnv-discuss at opensolaris.org
> Subject: [sfwnv-discuss] Request for code review - swig utility
> 
> Please see http://cr.opensolaris.org/~bruce_r/swig/ and provide any
> comments or changes I need to make.

=== Start of Comments ===

1. usr/src/cmd/Makefile
    & usr/src/Targetdirs
    & usr/src/pkgdefs/Makefile
   It looks as though this need resyncing with the gate otherwise
   It looks as though you are deleting stuff.

2. usr/src/cmd/swig/Makefile.sfw
   You have hard coded '--prefix=...' , you might
   want to use the predefined value in CONFIGURE_OPTIONS,
   see
http://cr.opensolaris.org/~rayx/erlang/webrev/usr/src/cmd/erlang/Makefil
e.sfw.html

3. usr/src/pkgdefs/SUNWswig/pkginfo
   You should have checked in the pkginfo.tmpl version
   Of this only; as this is created by the build system

4. usr/src/pkgdefs/SUNWswig/prototype_com
     & usr/src/pkgdefs/SUNWswig/prototype_i386
     & usr/src/pkgdefs/SUNWswig/prototype_sparc
   Copyright year and the format of the lines are wrong

5. usr/src/Targetdirs
   Your added stuff doesn't look aligned with the other
   Lines in the file

6. usr/src/cmd/swig/install-swig
    & usr/src/pkgdefs/SUNWswig/Makefile
    & usr/src/pkgdefs/SUNWswig/pkginfo.tmpl
    & check all the others
   Copyright year is wrong

7. usr/src/cmd/swig/swig.1
   Did you write this? If not did it come out of
   The tarball? If so why aren't you using straight 
   Out of the tarball rather than having a private copy?

8. usr/src/pkgdefs/SUNWswig/depend
   The Makefile says you are using the default 'depend'
   File, and this looks like that default file. So you
   Don't need this file checked in.

9. usr/src/pkgdefs/SUNWswig/pkginfo.tmpl
   'VERSION=' line is not correct

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