Hi Matt,

A few notes below (one editorial and one substantive).
There is a typo in this sentence (page 11):
In particular, the BGPsec
   attribute SHOULD NOT be removed even in the case where the BGPsec
   update message *has not* been that *has not* successfully validated.
Repeat of 'has not' above. May be the sentence was meant to read as follows?
In particular, the BGPsec
   attribute SHOULD NOT be removed even in the case where the BGPsec
   update message has not been validated (not attempted) or has not been 
successfully validated.
Substantive comment ....
Looking at this on page 23,
"BGPsec update messages do not contain an AS_PATH attribute.
   Therefore, a BGPsec speaker MUST utilize the AS path information in
   the BGPsec_Path attribute in all cases where it would otherwise use
   the AS path information in the AS_PATH attribute.  The only exception
   to this rule is when AS path information must be updated in order to
   propagate a route to a peer (in which case the BGPsec speaker follows
   the instructions in Section 
4<https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-sidr-bgpsec-protocol-13#section-4>)."
What is being said in the second sentence above is not clear.
No exception applies if the peer is BGPsec capable and negotiated BGPsec.
So is the exception for the case when the peer is non-BGPsec?
May the fix is to replace this (current):
"The only exception
   to this rule is when AS path information must be updated in order to
   propagate a route to a peer (in which case the BGPsec speaker follows
   the instructions in Section 
4<https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-sidr-bgpsec-protocol-13#section-4>)."
with the following (proposed):
The only exception
   to this rule is when AS path information must be re-formatted to AS_PATH in 
order to
   propagate a route to a non-BGPsec peer (in which case the BGPsec speaker 
follows
   the instructions in Section 4.4).
Sriram


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