Thanks Raman. The blocks weren't meant to be Visioesk but the original sketches were network diagrams so it does have that style. Yep the target market is a very technical audience, mostly CTOs/CIOs.
On Wednesday, 15 August 2012 14:01:00 UTC+10, Roman Berjoza wrote: > > James. > > The video is perfect. I absolutely get the idea. > I like the presentation in form of (Visio?) construction blocks. That is > easier to understand by enterprise architects (you target market?). > And the decisions in enterprize are not made by emotions, aren't they? > > Keep up guys, make it happen. > > Raman Biaroza > > On 15/08/2012 12:35 PM, James MacGregor wrote: > > Just released an explainer video for a new startup I'm working on: > http://vimeo.com/47221542 > > It's an enterprise product that I'm trying to make a little sexier and > startupy. This video is just the first step of a bunch of marketing > material to come so I'd really like to know if I'm on track. > > What I want to know is: > - Did you find it interesting or boring? > - Do you understand what the product actually does? > - Did you actually watch it to the end? (or was it too long) > - Did if feel corporate or startupy? > > Any feedback appreciated. > > -- > James MacGregor > > (mobile) +61 415996507 > (skype) jsmacgregor76 > (twitter) @jamessmacgregor <https://twitter.com/#%21/jamessmacgregor> > (email) jsmacg...@gmail.com <javascript:> > -- > You received this message because you are subscribed to the Silicon Beach > Australia mailing list. Vist http://siliconbeachaustralia.org for more > > Forum rules > 1) No lurkers! It is expected that you introduce yourself. > 2) No jobs postings. You can use http://siliconbeachaustralia.org/jobs > > > To post to this group, send email to > silicon-bea...@googlegroups.com <javascript:> > To unsubscribe from this group, send email to > silicon-beach-australia+unsubscr...@googlegroups.com <javascript:> > For more options, visit this group at > http://groups.google.com/group/silicon-beach-australia?hl=en?hl=en > > > -- You received this message because you are subscribed to the Silicon Beach Australia mailing list. Vist http://siliconbeachaustralia.org for more Forum rules 1) No lurkers! It is expected that you introduce yourself. 2) No jobs postings. You can use http://siliconbeachaustralia.org/jobs To post to this group, send email to silicon-beach-australia@googlegroups.com To unsubscribe from this group, send email to silicon-beach-australia+unsubscr...@googlegroups.com For more options, visit this group at http://groups.google.com/group/silicon-beach-australia?hl=en?hl=en
