Hi Pushpinder, the Memtell landing page looks beautiful, well done. There's a couple of typographical errors on the page:
1. Replace "...which everyone can share..." with "...that enables everyone to share..." in this sentence: Memtell is a free smart phone application using which everyone can share memories and keep them safe on the cloud! Also should be "in the cloud" not "on". 2. Legacy - replace "for time to come" with "for years to come". 3. Growth - delete "or" from "if you could listen to or the memory" and change "once off" to "one-off" or "one off". 4. Exploration - "and share on the go" should be "and share them on the go" Good luck with it. On Sunday, 2 February 2014 13:34:14 UTC+11, Pushpinder Bagga wrote: > > Hello everyone, > > I hope you remember me from an introduction I made earlier in this group - > *"Introduction: > Entrepreneur ... Photo Journalist from Adelaide"* > > *News: *After a small seed funding and a lot of hard work, we recently > launched our flagship product Memtell on the Web, iOS and Android networks. > > Memtell stands for memory tell, an app for your smartphone/tablet using >> which everyone and record their memories on photos and preserve them on the >> cloud for free. Our target market is of Mothers who we feel are the carers >> in the family and people with Alzheimer's (we would soon be doing clinical >> trials to check if Memtell helps improve the mood of the user). > > > We are a startup and have our first version just out, a humble request to > everyone reading this thread to try it out and send us feedback so we can > improve the usability, implementation and thought process for the product. > > We have a vision for the product and we are pursuing it, what would be > interesting is to see what our users think of it and how they use it. > *Eg:* Mark, a security inspector in Adelaide use Memtell to record all > the onsite irregularities he notices during his inspection and reports it > immediately to everyone via email while Rauff a designer uses it to present > draft designs to his clients. > > Website - http://www.memtell.com/ > > You may also email me your feedback at pushpin...@gmail.com <javascript:> > > PS: Please let me know and I am more than happy to give a Premium Account > to every member of Silicon Beach Australia helping us review the product. > > -- -- You received this message because you are subscribed to the Silicon Beach Australia mailing list. Vist http://siliconbeachaustralia.org for more Forum rules 1) No lurkers! It is expected that you introduce yourself. 2) No jobs postings. You can use http://siliconbeachaustralia.org/jobs To post to this group, send email to silicon-beach-australia@googlegroups.com To unsubscribe from this group, send email to silicon-beach-australia+unsubscr...@googlegroups.com For more options, visit this group at http://groups.google.com/group/silicon-beach-australia?hl=en?hl=en --- You received this message because you are subscribed to the Google Groups "Silicon Beach Australia" group. To unsubscribe from this group and stop receiving emails from it, send an email to silicon-beach-australia+unsubscr...@googlegroups.com. For more options, visit https://groups.google.com/groups/opt_out.
