hmm...
(In a point of view of Charles)
*It was one of those rainy days ya know, back
in the 1940's when i was a private eye
detective. Yeah the job was real tough man! Back then you
couldn't turn your back on anyone without suspecting them
for whatever ya know? specially since my partner Det.
David died at a night club one nite.
*I remember like it was yesturday....
*After a night of solving a case we decided to
celebrate*
I know this great place downtown *says David* its got
dancing girls, booze and did i mention tons of entertainment
if ya know what i mean! yeah!
*So weees decided to go to this place. When we got
there the line to get in was long but since David knew the
bodyguard we got in quickly. The place was bouncin. We sat
down and ordered two drinks and were talking about the day
when we were interupted by the anouncer on stage*
WELCOME ALL TO THE QTHEAVEN NIGHT CLUB! OUR
LAST PERFORMANCE OF THE NIGHT IS NONE OTHER THAN MISS
JACKIE!!
*all the guys in the audience were clapping maniacly
and some of them went up close to get a better view. Miss
Jackie came out in a red hot short dress and a feather boa.
She starts to do her number*
*Something about her reminded me of something... like i
knew her from somewhere...
David! thats Curley's sister! *I said to David*
who?! *wonders David*
The one that we killed earlier today! *I said almost
panicking* We better get out of here!
Charles! Baby! *says david laughing* relax have another
drink!
*I couldnt relax i knew something bad was going to
happen...so i excused myself to the bathroom and left David
to his googling. I didnt get as far as a foot in when i
heard from on stage a little scuffle*
HEY YOUR THE SON OF A BITCH THAT KILLED MY BROTHER!
*yells Jackie* KILL THIS WILL YA! *Jackie gets out her gun
from her leg strap and fires 3 shots at David*
*the crowd starts screaming and running away leaving
David on the floor. I come up running to David seeing if he
was ok*
It was worth it! *says David under his last gasp for
air* I regret nothing.....
*Later that night the cops arrested Jackie but
mistakenly took her to a all male jail cells... nobody
seemed to mind. They even let her do a couple shows a
month.*
*and me, now retired in Miami I always look back and
think of different ways to end that night....
the end...
bleeeh! this one sucked too LoL
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Message-------
Date:
Saturday, October 04, 2003 04:31:45 PM
Subject:
[Sndbox] Alright..
Hey Huggy, why
should Jen, Stephi and I get to have all the fun? Create a
fictional past for these 3: Jackie, the Rev, and David.
lol
Greg
Hopper
"Why is it that
our children can't read a Bible in school, but they can
in prison?"
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