But you did give critical literary
advice. And quite well. You said:
Your story helped me to remember that "belly laugh" that toddlers
are capable of and
brought a smile to my face.
brought a smile to my face.
That is exactly what an author is looking
for. So you verified that she did it right by recounting your reaction to
the story.
Charles Mims
From: [EMAIL PROTECTED] [mailto:[EMAIL PROTECTED] On Behalf Of Tim Harder
Sent: Sunday, January 18, 2004 9:35 AM
To: The Sandbox Discussion List
Subject: Re: [Sndbox] Triplets.doc (Ewoka)
Erica,
Having only a high school education, I don't feel qualified to give critical literary advise.
The triplets in your story are lucky to have someone like you to spend time with them.
Being able to appreciate children like you do is a gift.
Your story helped me to remember that "belly laugh" that toddlers are capable of and
brought a smile to my face.
Tim
No Trouble With Triplets
I am trapped.
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