Erica,
Best I can do is send you the email from my sent folder.  So some of them will be in the replies, so just read each from the bottom up. Starting with this one.
 
Charles Mims
http://www.the-sandbox.org
 

Most people get a fair amount of fun out of their lives, but on balance life is suffering, and only the very young or very foolish imagine otherwise. - George Orwell
 


From: Charles [mailto:[EMAIL PROTECTED]
Sent: Sunday, January 18, 2004 2:38 PM
To: 'The Sandbox Discussion List'
Subject: RE: [Sndbox] Triplets.doc (Ewoka)

But you did give critical literary advice.  And quite well.  You said:
Your story helped me to remember that "belly laugh" that toddlers are capable of and
brought a smile to my face.

That is exactly what an author is looking for.  So you verified that she did it right by recounting your reaction to the story.
 
 
Charles Mims
http://www.the-sandbox.org
 
 


From: [EMAIL PROTECTED] [mailto:[EMAIL PROTECTED] On Behalf Of Tim Harder
Sent: Sunday, January 18, 2004 9:35 AM
To: The Sandbox Discussion List
Subject: Re: [Sndbox] Triplets.doc (Ewoka)



Erica,

Having only a high school education, I don't feel qualified to give critical literary advise.

The triplets in your story are lucky to have someone like you to spend time with them.
Being able to appreciate children like you do is a gift.
Your story helped me to remember that "belly laugh" that toddlers are capable of and
brought a smile to my face.

Tim






No Trouble With Triplets

 

I am trapped.
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