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Thanks for your critique. I basically sent out my first draft, so I was aware of the overexplaining. My mentor advised me to cut it by about 500 words.
I'm aiming it towards Woman's Day/Family Circle/Parents magazine type of audiences.
Erica "I don't want to control everything, I just want people and events to mold to my desires!"
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