Sat, 28 Jan 2017 17:26:00 +0000 (UTC)
XMPP Extensions Editor <edi...@xmpp.org> wrote:

> 5. Is the specification accurate and clearly written?

I think the sentence:

> ALPN (RFC 7301) requires registration of the new Protocol IDs,
> 'xmpp-client' and 'xmpp-server', specified in this document

is incorrect, because 'xmpp-client' and 'xmpp-server' are not Protocol
IDs, but "Identification Sequences" in RFC7301 terminology. At least I
didn't find formal definition of "Protocol IDs" in the RFC while
"Identification Sequence" is very well defined. As I understand,
Protocol ID is in our case a three-tuple (XMPP, xmpp-client,
url_of_XEP). So I would rewrite the section as follows:

"ALPN (RFC 7301) requires registration of the new Protocol IDs. This
document specifies two Protocol IDs:

Protocol: XMPP
Identification Sequence:
  0x78 0x6d 0x70 0x70 0x2d 0x73 0x65 0x72 0x76 0x65 0x72 ("xmpp-server")
Reference: [http://xmpp.org/extensions/xep-0368.html]

Protocol: XMPP
Identification Sequence:
  0x78 0x6d 0x70 0x70 0x2d 0x63 0x6c 0x69 0x65 0x6e 0x74 ("xmpp-client")
Reference: [http://xmpp.org/extensions/xep-0368.html]

The registry is currently located here."

This would be consistent with RFC7301 (section 6 "IANA Considerations").
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