Austin English: > On Sun, Aug 9, 2015 at 6:42 AM, sajolida <sajol...@pimienta.org> wrote: >> Austin English: >>> On Aug 8, 2015 11:30 AM, "intrigeri" <intrig...@boum.org> wrote: >>>> >>>>> Consider using <a >>>>> href='https://www.virtualbox.org/'>VirtualBox</a> instead. >>>> >>>> I'd rather move this one to the doc page about virtualization (linked >>>> below), which will give us more room to warn agains the non-free >>>> extension pack that's featured quite prominently on their download >>>> page. That would be the second modification needed there, to make it >>>> consistent with what Austin English is implementing. >>>> >>>> Thoughts? >> >> Ok, so adjusting my last proposal we could: >> >> 1. Change the title into "Warning: non-free virtual machine detected!" >> >> 2. Change the body into: >> >> "Both the host operating system and the virtualization software are >> able to monitor what you are doing in Tails. >> >> Additionally, only free software, both as operating system and >> virtualization software, can be trustworthy. >> <a >> href='file:///usr/share/doc/tails/website/doc/advanced_topics/virtualization.en.html#security'>Learn >> more...</a> >> >> That's better, no? > > That phrasing sounds awkward to me. How about: > "Both the host operating system and the virtualization software are > able to monitor what you are doing in Tails. > > Only free software can be considered trustworthy, for both the host > operating system and the virtualization software. > > <a > href='file:///usr/share/doc/tails/website/doc/advanced_topics/virtualization.en.html#security'>Learn > more...</a> > > Still not perfect, but it's an awkward sentence to try to phrase.
Fine with me, especially if you're a native speaker. I don't know if that's your case, but personally I'm not :) _______________________________________________ Tails-dev mailing list Tails-dev@boum.org https://mailman.boum.org/listinfo/tails-dev To unsubscribe from this list, send an empty email to tails-dev-unsubscr...@boum.org.
