On Mon, Aug 10, 2015 at 8:42 AM, sajolida <sajol...@pimienta.org> wrote: > Austin English: >> On Sun, Aug 9, 2015 at 6:42 AM, sajolida <sajol...@pimienta.org> wrote: >>> Austin English: >>>> On Aug 8, 2015 11:30 AM, "intrigeri" <intrig...@boum.org> wrote: >>>>> >>>>>> Consider using <a >>>>>> href='https://www.virtualbox.org/'>VirtualBox</a> instead. >>>>> >>>>> I'd rather move this one to the doc page about virtualization (linked >>>>> below), which will give us more room to warn agains the non-free >>>>> extension pack that's featured quite prominently on their download >>>>> page. That would be the second modification needed there, to make it >>>>> consistent with what Austin English is implementing. >>>>> >>>>> Thoughts? >>> >>> Ok, so adjusting my last proposal we could: >>> >>> 1. Change the title into "Warning: non-free virtual machine detected!" >>> >>> 2. Change the body into: >>> >>> "Both the host operating system and the virtualization software are >>> able to monitor what you are doing in Tails. >>> >>> Additionally, only free software, both as operating system and >>> virtualization software, can be trustworthy. >>> <a >>> href='file:///usr/share/doc/tails/website/doc/advanced_topics/virtualization.en.html#security'>Learn >>> more...</a> >>> >>> That's better, no? >> >> That phrasing sounds awkward to me. How about: >> "Both the host operating system and the virtualization software are >> able to monitor what you are doing in Tails. >> >> Only free software can be considered trustworthy, for both the host >> operating system and the virtualization software. >> >> <a >> href='file:///usr/share/doc/tails/website/doc/advanced_topics/virtualization.en.html#security'>Learn >> more...</a> >> >> Still not perfect, but it's an awkward sentence to try to phrase. > > Fine with me, especially if you're a native speaker. I don't know if > that's your case, but personally I'm not :)
Yes, I am :). It sounds more natural to me than your suggestion, though there's definitely room for improvement on it, as it sounds a bit awkward. Updated patch attached: https://labs.riseup.net/code/attachments/download/884/updated-warning.txt -- -Austin _______________________________________________ Tails-dev mailing list Tails-dev@boum.org https://mailman.boum.org/listinfo/tails-dev To unsubscribe from this list, send an empty email to tails-dev-unsubscr...@boum.org.
