Now that there is radiusd(8) in base, I suggest the following changes:

* add back the manual section number to 'Xr radiusd' in login_radius.8
  and in login.conf.5

* remove a sentence from CAVEATS which is no longer true.  I don't
  think that `.Xr packages 7' is necessary.

* the grammar of one sentence seems odd, I added a 'to' (second hunk).
  
Index: libexec/login_radius/login_radius.8
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RCS file: /cvs/src/libexec/login_radius/login_radius.8,v
retrieving revision 1.12
diff -u -p -r1.12 login_radius.8
--- libexec/login_radius/login_radius.8 14 Aug 2013 08:39:31 -0000      1.12
+++ libexec/login_radius/login_radius.8 27 Sep 2015 12:34:20 -0000
@@ -49,7 +49,7 @@
 The
 .Nm
 utility contacts the
-.Xr radiusd
+.Xr radiusd 8
 daemon to authenticate a
 .Ar user .
 If no
@@ -60,8 +60,8 @@ When executed as the name
 .Pa login_ Ns Ar style ,
 .Nm
 will request
-.Xr radiusd
-use the authentication specified by
+.Xr radiusd 8
+to use the authentication specified by
 .Ar style .
 .Pp
 The options are as follows:
@@ -95,7 +95,7 @@ server shared_secret
 .Pp
 It is expected that rather than requesting the radius style directly
 (in which case the
-.Xr radiusd
+.Xr radiusd 8
 server uses a default style)
 that
 .Nm
@@ -111,7 +111,7 @@ to both of those names.
 Now when the user requests one of those authentication styles,
 .Nm
 will automatically forward the request to the remote
-.Xr radiusd
+.Xr radiusd 8
 and request it do the requested style of authentication.
 .Sh LOGIN.CONF VARIABLES
 The
@@ -154,11 +154,6 @@ list of radius servers and their associa
 .Xr login 1 ,
 .Xr login.conf 5
 .Sh CAVEATS
-.Ox
-does not ship with a radius server in the default install, however
-several are available via
-.Xr packages 7 .
-.Pp
 For
 .Nm
 to function, the
Index: share/man/man5/login.conf.5
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RCS file: /cvs/src/share/man/man5/login.conf.5,v
retrieving revision 1.60
diff -u -p -r1.60 login.conf.5
--- share/man/man5/login.conf.5 24 Sep 2015 13:24:59 -0000      1.60
+++ share/man/man5/login.conf.5 27 Sep 2015 12:34:20 -0000
@@ -542,7 +542,7 @@ and
 are provided for use by programs like
 .Xr ftpd 8
 and
-.Xr radiusd .
+.Xr radiusd 8 .
 If no service type is specified,
 .Li login
 is used.

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