At 9:35 AM -0600 2/17/06, Stephen Hayes (TX/EUS) wrote:
 > There is a significant problem with have a document edited
 pre-approval and then not re-editing post-approval, namely the
 changes that get introduced during the approval process itself. A
 typical change is "add a section to the Security Considerations
 talking about how Wxyz interacts with this protocol." Unless the
 authors use exactly the same spelling, capitalization, reference
 format, and so on, that new section will not match the rest of the
 document.

Does this mean that you would permit stylistic changes as part of the post-approval editing?

Only to match any stylistic changes that were introduced in the pre-approval editing (or that the document authors were trying to follow themselves). If a document has had pre-approval editing, the post-approval editing really should only be on the diffs.

 > There is also the very real issue of document authors not doing some
 of the proposed edits, either intentionally or unintentionally.

If there is a problem with review suggestions not being done or being mangled, wouldn't it be better to have a recheck done as part of the pre-approval review?

Maybe, but maybe not. It really depends on the purpose of the edits and how intrusive the Publisher is allowed to be in making changes. Some authors are quite graceful about being edited, while others are not so graceful. Giving the Publisher the ability to prevent a document from even getting to the approval stage because the authors don't want to implement some editorial changes may or may not be what the IETF wants. For that matter, giving the Publisher the unilateral right to make editorial changes in post-approval editing may or may not be what the IETF wants.

A possible way to frame it is that pre-approval editing be considered a polite foreshadowing of what the authors should expect in the post-approval editing. The authors should either incorporate all of the pre-approval editing (the norm) or do most of it and tell the Publisher why they didn't do some of it. That input could be used in the post-approval editing.

I have no problem with all documents passing through post-approval editing as a safety net, but for those documents already pre-approval reviewed, wouldn't it be better to only correct major flaws (missing boilerplate, etc.).

If it takes only a few minutes to correct minor flaws in the text that has changed during review, there seems like no good reason not to do so.

Stylistic consistency is a nice goal, and reasonable people can disagree on how much effort to put into it.

Fully agree. That's why pre-approval editing is valuable: bring up the changes when there feels like less urgency.

I have heard a lot more complaints about IETF publication delays than IETF publication quality.

Absolutely right.

--Paul Hoffman, Director
--VPN Consortium

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