On 05.11.25 19:51, Sean Turner via Datatracker wrote:
Please review and indicate your support or objection [...]
I do not support publication in its current state, but I do not have a strong opinion.
Objections should be motivated and suggestions to resolve them are
highly appreciated.

I would like the draft to address the following:

 * Introduction and motivation is too small: literally two sentences.
   That's clearly insufficient. Sure, I'm not a PQ expert but an I-D is
   not for experts only, isn't it?

 * If compliance is the motivation, it should be added in the
   introduction/motivation with at least one pointer to authentic
   reference of concrete regulation. If it is for National Security
   Systems (NSS), such systems might also require attestation, and
   hence my following comment.

 * The security considerations in the draft provide no details
   regarding potential extensions. For example, if I were to support
   pure PQ as well as attestation within the handshake, I am left with
   no guidance on what are the specifics of pure PQ that I should
   absolutely consider.

 * Has any formal analysis been done for this draft?

Submitted a minor PR for typos [0]

-Usama

[0] https://github.com/tlswg/draft-ietf-tls-mlkem/pull/8

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