Hi Stig, As below, could you look at this draft to see if your comments have been resolved?
Thanks, Donald =============================== Donald E. Eastlake 3rd +1-508-333-2270 (cell) 155 Beaver Street, Milford, MA 01757 USA d3e...@gmail.com On Sat, Jun 4, 2016 at 6:36 PM, Donald Eastlake <d3e...@gmail.com> wrote: > Hi Stig, > > https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-trill-rbridge-multilevel-03 has > been uploaded with the comment resolutions below incorporated. > > Thanks, > Donald > =============================== > Donald E. Eastlake 3rd +1-508-333-2270 (cell) > 155 Beaver Street, Milford, MA 01757 USA > d3e...@gmail.com > > > On Thu, May 26, 2016 at 12:23 AM, Donald Eastlake <d3e...@gmail.com> > wrote: > > Hi Stig, > > > > On Wed, May 25, 2016 at 3:26 PM, Alia Atlas <akat...@gmail.com> wrote: > >> Stig, > >> > >> Thank you very much for your review. I'm also forwarding it to trill so > >> that the WG can see it. > >> > >> Regards, > >> Alia > >> > >> On Wed, May 25, 2016 at 2:28 PM, Stig Venaas <s...@venaas.com> wrote: > >>> > >>> Hi > >>> > >>> Sorry for being a bit late with this review. At least the document is > >>> well written and easy to understand. There are no significant issues. > >>> > >>> I am wondering about the security considerations though. Are there > >>> really no differences between the multi-level alternatives when it > >>> comes to security? > > > > Well, I guess a couple sentences could be added that the choice of > > using aggregated nicknames, and the resulting possible duplication of > > nicknames between areas, increases the possibility of a TRILL Data > > packet being delivered to the wrong egress RBridge if areas are > > suddenly merged. However, is many cases the data would be discarded at > > that egress because it would not match a known end station data label > > / MAC address. > > > >>> I have two tiny editorial comments. > >>> > >>> Section 1.4 typo > >>> RBridge - Routing Bridge, an alterntive name for a TRILL switch > >>> ^^^^^^^^^ > > > > OK, > > > >>> Also, several places it says "non-zero" which is correct, but there > >>> are some instances of "nonzero". > > > > Apparently both of those are correct but I agree the draft should use > > one of them consistently. I'll replace the two instances of nonzero > > with the hyphenated form. > > > > Thanks, > > Donald > > =============================== > > Donald E. Eastlake 3rd +1-508-333-2270 (cell) > > 155 Beaver Street, Milford, MA 01757 USA > > d3e...@gmail.com > > > >>> Stig > >>> > >>> > >>> On Wed, May 4, 2016 at 11:52 PM, Jonathan Hardwick > >>> <jonathan.hardw...@metaswitch.com> wrote: > >>> > Hi Stig > >>> > > >>> > > >>> > > >>> > Please would you do a routing directorate QA review of > >>> > draft-ietf-trill-rbridge-multilevel? > >>> > > >>> > > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-trill-rbridge-multilevel/ > >>> > > >>> > > >>> > > >>> > Note that this is a “QA review.” The document is still being worked > on > >>> > by > >>> > the TRILL working group. The goal of this review is to provide a > >>> > different > >>> > perspective on the work and to improve its quality. Hence, your > comments > >>> > will be provided primarily for the benefit of the TRILL chairs and > the > >>> > document authors. > >>> > > >>> > > >>> > > >>> > Please could you provide your comments by May 20 and copy your > comments > >>> > to > >>> > the rtg-dir list? > >>> > > >>> > > >>> > > >>> > The following web page contains a briefing on the QA process, and > >>> > guidance > >>> > for the QA reviewer. > >>> > > >>> > https://trac.tools.ietf.org/area/rtg/trac/wiki/RtgDirDocQa > >>> > > >>> > > >>> > > >>> > Please let me know whether you can do it, or not. > >>> > > >>> > > >>> > > >>> > Many thanks > >>> > > >>> > Jon > >>> > > >>> > > >>> > > >>> > > >>> > > >>> > > >>> > > >>> > > >>> > >> > >> > >> _______________________________________________ > >> trill mailing list > >> trill@ietf.org > >> https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/trill > >> >
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