On Wed, Aug 3, 2016 at 5:08 PM, Stig Venaas <s...@venaas.com> wrote: > Hi > > The new version looks good to me. It addresses my comments and I see > the draft has been improved further with additional changes.
Thanks, Donald =============================== Donald E. Eastlake 3rd +1-508-333-2270 (cell) 155 Beaver Street, Milford, MA 01757 USA d3e...@gmail.com > Stig > > > On Tue, Aug 2, 2016 at 7:02 PM, Donald Eastlake <d3e...@gmail.com> wrote: > > Hi Stig, > > > > As below, could you look at this draft to see if your comments have been > > resolved? > > > > Thanks, > > Donald > > =============================== > > Donald E. Eastlake 3rd +1-508-333-2270 (cell) > > 155 Beaver Street, Milford, MA 01757 USA > > d3e...@gmail.com > > > > On Sat, Jun 4, 2016 at 6:36 PM, Donald Eastlake <d3e...@gmail.com> > wrote: > >> > >> Hi Stig, > >> > >> https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-trill-rbridge-multilevel-03 has > >> been uploaded with the comment resolutions below incorporated. > >> > >> Thanks, > >> Donald > >> =============================== > >> Donald E. Eastlake 3rd +1-508-333-2270 (cell) > >> 155 Beaver Street, Milford, MA 01757 USA > >> d3e...@gmail.com > >> > >> > >> On Thu, May 26, 2016 at 12:23 AM, Donald Eastlake <d3e...@gmail.com> > >> wrote: > >> > Hi Stig, > >> > > >> > On Wed, May 25, 2016 at 3:26 PM, Alia Atlas <akat...@gmail.com> > wrote: > >> >> Stig, > >> >> > >> >> Thank you very much for your review. I'm also forwarding it to trill > >> >> so > >> >> that the WG can see it. > >> >> > >> >> Regards, > >> >> Alia > >> >> > >> >> On Wed, May 25, 2016 at 2:28 PM, Stig Venaas <s...@venaas.com> > wrote: > >> >>> > >> >>> Hi > >> >>> > >> >>> Sorry for being a bit late with this review. At least the document > is > >> >>> well written and easy to understand. There are no significant > issues. > >> >>> > >> >>> I am wondering about the security considerations though. Are there > >> >>> really no differences between the multi-level alternatives when it > >> >>> comes to security? > >> > > >> > Well, I guess a couple sentences could be added that the choice of > >> > using aggregated nicknames, and the resulting possible duplication of > >> > nicknames between areas, increases the possibility of a TRILL Data > >> > packet being delivered to the wrong egress RBridge if areas are > >> > suddenly merged. However, is many cases the data would be discarded at > >> > that egress because it would not match a known end station data label > >> > / MAC address. > >> > > >> >>> I have two tiny editorial comments. > >> >>> > >> >>> Section 1.4 typo > >> >>> RBridge - Routing Bridge, an alterntive name for a TRILL switch > >> >>> ^^^^^^^^^ > >> > > >> > OK, > >> > > >> >>> Also, several places it says "non-zero" which is correct, but there > >> >>> are some instances of "nonzero". > >> > > >> > Apparently both of those are correct but I agree the draft should use > >> > one of them consistently. I'll replace the two instances of nonzero > >> > with the hyphenated form. > >> > > >> > Thanks, > >> > Donald > >> > =============================== > >> > Donald E. Eastlake 3rd +1-508-333-2270 (cell) > >> > 155 Beaver Street, Milford, MA 01757 USA > >> > d3e...@gmail.com > >> > > >> >>> Stig > >> >>> > >> >>> > >> >>> On Wed, May 4, 2016 at 11:52 PM, Jonathan Hardwick > >> >>> <jonathan.hardw...@metaswitch.com> wrote: > >> >>> > Hi Stig > >> >>> > > >> >>> > > >> >>> > > >> >>> > Please would you do a routing directorate QA review of > >> >>> > draft-ietf-trill-rbridge-multilevel? > >> >>> > > >> >>> > > >> >>> > > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-trill-rbridge-multilevel/ > >> >>> > > >> >>> > > >> >>> > > >> >>> > Note that this is a “QA review.” The document is still being > worked > >> >>> > on > >> >>> > by > >> >>> > the TRILL working group. The goal of this review is to provide a > >> >>> > different > >> >>> > perspective on the work and to improve its quality. Hence, your > >> >>> > comments > >> >>> > will be provided primarily for the benefit of the TRILL chairs and > >> >>> > the > >> >>> > document authors. > >> >>> > > >> >>> > > >> >>> > > >> >>> > Please could you provide your comments by May 20 and copy your > >> >>> > comments > >> >>> > to > >> >>> > the rtg-dir list? > >> >>> > > >> >>> > > >> >>> > > >> >>> > The following web page contains a briefing on the QA process, and > >> >>> > guidance > >> >>> > for the QA reviewer. > >> >>> > > >> >>> > https://trac.tools.ietf.org/area/rtg/trac/wiki/RtgDirDocQa > >> >>> > > >> >>> > > >> >>> > > >> >>> > Please let me know whether you can do it, or not. > >> >>> > > >> >>> > > >> >>> > > >> >>> > Many thanks > >> >>> > > >> >>> > Jon > >> >>> > > >> >>> > > >> >>> > > >> >>> > > >> >>> > > >> >>> > > >> >>> > > >> >>> > > >> >>> > >> >> > >> >> > >> >> _______________________________________________ > >> >> trill mailing list > >> >> trill@ietf.org > >> >> https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/trill > >> >> > > > > >
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