I'm not entirely happy with the new description for Update Notifier:
"Check for available updates automatically".  The wording is somewhat
verbose (why would it check for unavailable updates, and how? Why is
this "automatically"?  I think I kind of know why you put it there, but
is it really necessary?) but above all, if you don't know what sorts of
updates, how would you find out?  Both of the proposals above are IMHO
more informative.

Martin Albisetti  wrote on 2009-07-02:
> "Update notifier" - "Notifies you of system updates"

Andruk  wrote on 2009-07-02:
> "Update notifier" - "Notify about application updates"

"Check for software updates from Ubuntu and other software sources",
though a bit long, might approach some sort of synthesis.

Although I criticize the details of his wording, I think Michael Vogt's
proposal captures the essence of the discussion so far; describe what
functionality will stop working if you uncheck it.  After all, that's
what this dialog box is meant for.  Hence, perhaps Bluetooth Manager
could be something like "Discover Bluetooth devices within range" and
Network Manager perhaps something along the lines of "Discover and
connect to networks" (by implication, Internet connections; perhaps that
could somehow be worked into the description still).

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Poor descriptions for some applications in Startup Programs window
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