On Thu, Apr 14, 2011 at 3:14 PM, Benjamin Turner <b.g.tur...@gmail.com>wrote:
> > News post >> >> https://picasaweb.google.com/jorge.g.mare/UbuntuStudioArtwork#5595278554459506242 >> >> User profile >> >> https://picasaweb.google.com/jorge.g.mare/UbuntuStudioArtwork#5595278554875022562 >> >> Blog post >> >> https://picasaweb.google.com/jorge.g.mare/UbuntuStudioArtwork#5595284881897234786 >> >> >> Jorge >> > Jorge - > I think that this theme is coming along wonderfully. There are a few > things that you may still be working on, but I thought I would give my 2 > cents. The main elements of page adhere to a pretty good grid system (the > green lines in the link below). There are some things that don't really > follow the grid that you are beginning to establish (red lines). > It seems that perhaps these elements are part of the 'main content' or > something like that, and that they are structured more like a directory tree > - great for viewing files - but somewhat breaking from your design grid. > > Overall, I think that your font choices are doing their jobs - I can tell > that 'UbuntuStudio Live Recording' is the title of the article, and that the > 'view edit unpublish' are navigational. However the 'Home' from the main > menu and the 'home' in the content area feels a little redundant, or perhaps > unclear as to what each instance does. Perhaps if you are trying to > establish where the user is, you could hi-light the 'home' in the menu area? > > I've uploaded a screenshot with a few annotations to hopefully clarify what > I mean: > > > https://picasaweb.google.com/lh/photo/9k0EVSEZ-UoHpjegBBjN-iHR1PMKhI6HfAFTAPr0k3A?feat=directlink > > Thanks for all the great work you're doing! > - Benjamin > > > I wanted to point out that this is a perfect example of critique. Very clear and well thought out. We need more of this. -- -Cory K.
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