see comments below throughout -
From: Kolbjørn Stuestøl <kolbjo...@stuestoel.no>
Date: Sat, Dec 5, 2015 at 7:19 AM
Subject: Re: [libreoffice-users] LibreLogo tutorial
To: users@global.libreoffice.org
Den 05.12.2015 01:58, anne-ology skreiv:
This first section looks good as is;
> but does have a few grammatical errors which I'll point out in [
> ]s.
>
> In spite of what some computer users say or do, I'll continue to
> stick with proper grammar -
>
I agree. But I know too little about English grammar and typographic rules
[that's what an editor does]
after a period in a sentence there should be 2 spaces even though
> these machines default to only 1;
>
In HTML double or more spaces becomes a single space. See Mark's reply to
this list. It is a lot of work to add the code ' ' behind every period.
[I know; don't worry about this; the reason for the double space was
to make it easier to read -
as commas & periods could be confused so the extra space allowed
the eye to catch the end of the sentence easier;
but these machines, I think, started deleting that extra space
in their beginning days of the 0s & 1s]
and double quotes are for conversations - single quotes - or in
> your Norwegian << >> - would be used for empasis, et.al.
>
I'll try to remember this.
[seems as if this is same as your native language]
> And BTW - looks as if you've spent a lot of time creating a very
> good site & program,
>
Thank you.
Brian Barker (many thanks to him) has proofread the whole site and sent it
to me private.
[I thought about doing so, then thought the list members might have
further thoughts ;-) ]
I will use his suggestions together with yours.
It will take some time to code it as I prefer hand coding.
[sounds good]
Perhaps because the settings of of my e-mail reader I did not see the film.
Was displayed as '[Image: display film]'.
Kolbjørn
> How to open LibreLogo in LibreOffice
>
> The great majority who use LibreOffice do not know there is a Logo variant
> in Writer. There are no direct links to LibreLogo on the menus. The only
> way, I think, is to open a new text document. In the main menu at the top
> of the page, press the View → Toolbars → Logo. This will open the
> LibreLogo toolbar. This toolbar contains some buttons to control the
> turtle and a command line where you can enter commands. Press on one of the
> buttons to bring up the turtle.
>
> ['great' is superfluous ...
>
> 'I think' is superfluous; you're the writer therefore this can
> either
> be left out or changed to possibly or probably ...
>
> 'turtle' ...
>
> command line to enter commands.]
> [image: vise film]
> The Buttons on the Menubar
>
> Every time you press on buttons Backward and Forward the turtle will be
> moved 10 pixels backwards or forwards. Buttons Right and Left will turn
> the turtle 15º clockwise or counter-clockwise. Button Home moves the
> turtle to the starting point in the middle of the page with the head
> upwards. Clear screen will remove all drawings from the page. Start and
> Stop are used to start and stop the execution of the program. The command
> line is used for entering commands, one line at a time. The button to the
> right of the command line is used to configure all commands with large
> letters and to translate the program into other languages. This is not
> used in this overview.
>
> [Each time you press on any button - ...
>
> will move ...
>
> backward or forward ...]
>
> If the purpose is to learn programming, only the command line and buttons
> to clear the screen and put the turtle back is helpful. The others buttons
> is used to create shapes without programming.
>
> [are helpful. The other buttons are]
>
>
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