This looks really great, Justin! My only nit at this time is in the box at the top left of the main page, 2nd para "It makes it possible for us and others to build a diverse, coherent messaging ecosystem." - "us and others" is a little off-putting for some reason - maybe something more like "It makes it possible for everyone to build diverse, coherent messaging ecosystems." ?
I'd also be in favor of going with this design in the live site. -Steve On 3/28/13 8:10 AM, "Justin Ross" <jr...@apache.org> wrote: >I've tried to incorporate some of the helpful suggestions on this >thread. Please take a look. > > http://people.apache.org/~jross/transom/head/index.html > >(Watch out, this is still very work-in-progress.) > >In addition to the front page changes, take a look at the reformulated >download page. > >Thanks! >Justin > >--------------------------------------------------------------------- >To unsubscribe, e-mail: users-unsubscr...@qpid.apache.org >For additional commands, e-mail: users-h...@qpid.apache.org > --------------------------------------------------------------------- To unsubscribe, e-mail: users-unsubscr...@qpid.apache.org For additional commands, e-mail: users-h...@qpid.apache.org
