It's interesting. You and Gordon both feel that way about first-person pronouns in the site text. I'll change it to "everyone", no problem.
On Thu, Mar 28, 2013 at 11:10 AM, Steve Huston <shus...@riverace.com> wrote: > This looks really great, Justin! My only nit at this time is in the box at > the top left of the main page, 2nd para "It makes it possible for us and > others to build a diverse, coherent messaging ecosystem." - "us and > others" is a little off-putting for some reason - maybe something more > like "It makes it possible for everyone to build diverse, coherent > messaging ecosystems." ? > > I'd also be in favor of going with this design in the live site. > > -Steve > > On 3/28/13 8:10 AM, "Justin Ross" <jr...@apache.org> wrote: > >>I've tried to incorporate some of the helpful suggestions on this >>thread. Please take a look. >> >> http://people.apache.org/~jross/transom/head/index.html >> >>(Watch out, this is still very work-in-progress.) >> >>In addition to the front page changes, take a look at the reformulated >>download page. >> >>Thanks! >>Justin >> >>--------------------------------------------------------------------- >>To unsubscribe, e-mail: users-unsubscr...@qpid.apache.org >>For additional commands, e-mail: users-h...@qpid.apache.org >> > > > --------------------------------------------------------------------- > To unsubscribe, e-mail: users-unsubscr...@qpid.apache.org > For additional commands, e-mail: users-h...@qpid.apache.org > --------------------------------------------------------------------- To unsubscribe, e-mail: users-unsubscr...@qpid.apache.org For additional commands, e-mail: users-h...@qpid.apache.org
