Hi,
During the UTA WG meeting I volunteered to review the latest draft
draft-ietf-uta-ciphersuites-in-sec-syslog-01. Thank you again to the Chris,
Sean, and Jo for the update to syslog security as it is directly used /
referenced in IEC TC57 WG15 documents.
I just found some nits in the draft:
* Section 3
* The reference to I-D.salowey-tls-rfc8447bis is outdated and should
refer to draft-ietf-tls-rfc8447bis instead
* Reference to I-D.saviram-tls-deprecate-obsolete-kex is outdated and
should be replaced by draft-ietf-tls-deprecate-obsolete-kex
* Section 5
* Reference to I-D.ietf-tls-dtls13 should refer to RFC 9147
* The Editors not may be deleted as section 6 specifies that early data
must not be used.
* Section 7
* The text that will be reflected in the IEC 62351 document handling
security events utilizing syslog (IEC 62351-14) needs to be updated. The
ciphersuite selected in draft-ietf-uta-ciphersuites-in-sec-syslog-01 is also
part of IEC 62351-3 on one hand. On the other hand,
draft-ietf-uta-ciphersuites-in-sec-syslog-01 may likely become an RFC earlier
than IEC 62351-14 becomes a standard. Therefore, the text for IEC 62351-14 can
be shortened by simply referencing the new RFC. As the text in this draft will
be removed prior to publication, I don't see a need to update it.
Best regards
Steffen
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