Yaniv Kaul has posted comments on this change.

Change subject: hooks:checkips: add checkips hook
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Patch Set 11:

(9 comments)

Some minor comments added.

https://gerrit.ovirt.org/#/c/54102/11/configure.ac
File configure.ac:

Line 400:       vdsm/virt/Makefile
Line 401:       vdsm/virt/vmdevices/Makefile
Line 402:       vdsm_hooks/Makefile
Line 403:       vdsm_hooks/allocate_net/Makefile
Line 404:       vdsm_hooks/checkips/Makefile
checkips should come after checkimages. I believe we sort alphabetically?
Line 405:       vdsm_hooks/checkimages/Makefile
Line 406:       vdsm_hooks/diskunmap/Makefile
Line 407:       vdsm_hooks/ethtool_options/Makefile
Line 408:       vdsm_hooks/extnet/Makefile


https://gerrit.ovirt.org/#/c/54102/11/vdsm_hooks/Makefile.am
File vdsm_hooks/Makefile.am:

Line 34: # Additional hooks
Line 35: if HOOKS
Line 36: SUBDIRS += \
Line 37:        allocate_net \
Line 38:        checkips \
same as previously - should come after checkimages.
Line 39:        checkimages \
Line 40:        diskunmap \
Line 41:        extnet \
Line 42:        extra_ipv4_addrs \


https://gerrit.ovirt.org/#/c/54102/11/vdsm_hooks/checkips/README
File vdsm_hooks/checkips/README:

Line 34:     In the host setup network configuration window, choose edit 
assigned
Line 35:     logical network, select custom property checkipv4 or checkipv6 and
Line 36:     enter VLAN IP or FQDN that you want to check for
Line 37:     connectivity(examples 8.8.8.8,2001:4860:4860::8888). So if you 
defined
Line 38:     checipv4 and checipv6 custom properties and if the host fails to 
ping
typo: checipv4 -> checkipv4
Line 39:     both IP's, it will drop the network's state to down.
Line 40:     If the network is defined as "required",


https://gerrit.ovirt.org/#/c/54102/11/vdsm_hooks/checkips/after_get_stats.py
File vdsm_hooks/checkips/after_get_stats.py:

Line 47: 
Line 48: CONNECTIVITY_TIMEOUT = 60
Line 49: 
Line 50: 
Line 51: def _is_network_accessible(net, stats_dir):
the name of the function is not related to what it does?
Line 52:     file_path = os.path.join(stats_dir, net)
Line 53:     if os.path.exists(file_path):
Line 54:         return (
Line 55:             time.time() - os.stat(file_path).st_mtime <=


Line 124:         print(
Line 125:             'test %s: interface %s has state %s' %
Line 126:             (test_msg, interface, state)
Line 127:         )
Line 128:     os.unlink(os.path.join(temp_dir, 'check_ipv4'))
Perhaps worth putting all this in a finally (and the above in a try, so any 
exception would still remove the files and the directory?
Line 129:     os.unlink(os.path.join(temp_dir, 'check_ipv6'))
Line 130:     os.rmdir(temp_dir)
Line 131: 
Line 132: 


https://gerrit.ovirt.org/#/c/54102/11/vdsm_hooks/checkips/checkipsd
File vdsm_hooks/checkips/checkipsd:

Line 1: #!/usr/bin/python
Shouldn't this file have a .py extension?
Line 2: #
Line 3: # Copyright 2008-2016 Red Hat, Inc.
Line 4: #
Line 5: # This program is free software; you can redistribute it and/or modify


Line 35: CHECKIPV6 = 'checkipv6'
Line 36: VDSM_CHECKIPS = 'vdsm-checkips'
Line 37: 
Line 38: 
Line 39: def get_ping_addresses(net_attrs):
Isn't this function available in the utils?
Line 40:     ping_addresses = []
Line 41:     if 'custom' in net_attrs:
Line 42:         for address_type in (CHECKIPV4, CHECKIPV6):
Line 43:             if address_type in net_attrs['custom']:


Line 54:     with open(file_path, 'a'):
Line 55:         os.utime(file_path, None)
Line 56: 
Line 57: 
Line 58: def _ping_address(address, address_type, net):
rename 'net' to 'interface' ?
Line 59:     ping_cmd = 'ping' if address_type == CHECKIPV4 else 'ping6'
Line 60:     command = [
Line 61:         ping_cmd,
Line 62:         '-c', '1',


Line 58: def _ping_address(address, address_type, net):
Line 59:     ping_cmd = 'ping' if address_type == CHECKIPV4 else 'ping6'
Line 60:     command = [
Line 61:         ping_cmd,
Line 62:         '-c', '1',
There were several comments that a single ping is not enough. For example, in 
hosted-engine setup - there was a request to try with more pings. I'd either 
have it as a variable, or by default use more than a single ping.
Line 63:         '-w', str(PING_TIMEOUT),
Line 64:         '-I', net,
Line 65:         address
Line 66:     ]


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