Some minor corrections - Line 1724 - change 'browser' to 'browse' and add 'one' from: +Line 38 creates a ``grid`` object that allows to browser, add and update the comments linked to a page. to: +Line 38 creates a ``grid`` object that allows one to browse, add and update the comments linked to a page.
Line 12921 - add 'to' from: +Attention: grid and smartgrid were experimental prior web2py version 2.0 ..... to: +Attention: grid and smartgrid were experimental prior to web2py version 2.0 ..... Line 12924 - change 'browser' to 'browse' from: +These are two high level gadgets that create complex CRUD controls. They provide pagination, the ability to browser, search, sort, create, update and delete records from a single gadgets. to: +These are two high level gadgets that create complex CRUD controls. They provide pagination, the ability to browse, search, sort, create, update and delete records from a single gadgets. Dane On Sunday, 20 January 2013 23:52:02 UTC, Massimo Di Pierro wrote: > > I am looking for help proofreading the final version of the book. It is > almost done up to a final touch. > > The attached file contains the changes between the 4th edition and 5th > edition (only the new text). It would be great is some native english > speaker could be me proof-read the changes. If you can help please edit the > text in place with a text editor, without adding line breaks or extra > spaces so I can diff the corrections. > > The first two people who volunteer to help and can proof-read the attached > file by Saturday, will receive a free copy of the printed book as soon as > it is done. > > Massimo > > > --