Michelle Olson wrote:
> Hi all,
>
> I've updated the feature spot with your text changes:
> http://www.opensolaris.org/os/project/website/content/home_page_draft9/
>   

Nice ... but there are two "that is" bits in there. I hate word smithing 
so if this is a dumb change just ignore it:

The OpenSolaris Zones Group 
<http://www.opensolaris.org/os/community/zones> develops technology that 
is a part of the ON Consolidation 
<http://opensolaris.org/os/project/onnv/> that is focused on allowing 
multiple applications to run in isolation from each other on the same 
physical hardware.


As part of the ON Consolidation 
<http://opensolaris.org/os/project/onnv/>, the OpenSolaris Zones Group 
<http://www.opensolaris.org/os/community/zones> develops technology that 
allows multiple applications to run in isolation from each other on the 
same physical hardware.


> I also drafted another feature spot since we have conflicting feedback 
> in equal numbers on the Zones piece and we're just a bit over a week 
> away from the Distro Meetup in France, so we could use this one instead:
>
> http://www.opensolaris.org/os/project/website/content/home_page_draft10/
>   

Oh, cool. The guys will be thrilled. :)

Jim
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