Jim Grisanzio wrote: > Michelle Olson wrote: >> Hi all, >> >> I've updated the feature spot with your text changes: >> http://www.opensolaris.org/os/project/website/content/home_page_draft9/ >> > > Nice ... but there are two "that is" bits in there. I hate word > smithing so if this is a dumb change just ignore it: > > The OpenSolaris Zones Group > <http://www.opensolaris.org/os/community/zones> develops technology > that is a part of the ON Consolidation > <http://opensolaris.org/os/project/onnv/> that is focused on allowing > multiple applications to run in isolation from each other on the same > physical hardware. > > > As part of the ON Consolidation > <http://opensolaris.org/os/project/onnv/>, the OpenSolaris Zones Group > <http://www.opensolaris.org/os/community/zones> develops technology > that allows multiple applications to run in isolation from each other > on the same physical hardware.
Thanks very much for the rewrite Jim, I've made this change. -Michelle > > >> I also drafted another feature spot since we have conflicting >> feedback in equal numbers on the Zones piece and we're just a bit >> over a week away from the Distro Meetup in France, so we could use >> this one instead: >> >> http://www.opensolaris.org/os/project/website/content/home_page_draft10/ >> > > Oh, cool. The guys will be thrilled. :) > > Jim _______________________________________________ website-discuss mailing list [email protected]
