michelle olson wrote: > Hi all, > > I've drafted a feature spot for 2008.11 here: > http://opensolaris.org/os/project/website/content/home_page_draft17/ > > The other changes continue to be work in progress. I added some new > graphics, links, and updated landing pages to try to address concerns > from the prior review. Let me know what you think. > > Thanks in advance for your help to improve this content.
The buttons don't look right. I think this would be better off as small images with a text-based link next to them instead of an entire graphic. I would change "Suspend/Resume and CPU power management" to "Suspend/Resume and CPU power management for many platforms"; or otherwise qualify it somehow. This functionality is still very limited in what configurations it works with. I would change "More than 50 F/OSS apps, including top, sudo and emacs" to "Many F/OSS applications have been added, including top, sudo, and emacs". Specifically, my problem is with quantifying it with "50" as that sounds rather pathetic :( -- Shawn Walker _______________________________________________ website-discuss mailing list [email protected]
