Hi Shawn, Thanks for helping out, my comments inline.
Shawn Walker wrote: > michelle olson wrote: >> Hi all, >> >> I've drafted a feature spot for 2008.11 here: >> http://opensolaris.org/os/project/website/content/home_page_draft17/ >> >> The other changes continue to be work in progress. I added some new >> graphics, links, and updated landing pages to try to address concerns >> from the prior review. Let me know what you think. >> >> Thanks in advance for your help to improve this content. > > The buttons don't look right. I think this would be better off as > small images with a text-based link next to them instead of an entire > graphic. Right, that's where I started and I didn't get a great response, so I worked on better graphics, ho hum: http://opensolaris.org/os/project/website/content/home_page_draft_15/ > > I would change "Suspend/Resume and CPU power management" to > "Suspend/Resume and CPU power management for many platforms"; or > otherwise qualify it somehow. This functionality is still very > limited in what configurations it works with. Thanks, I've made this change. > > I would change "More than 50 F/OSS apps, including top, sudo and > emacs" to "Many F/OSS applications have been added, including top, > sudo, and emacs". Specifically, my problem is with quantifying it > with "50" as that sounds rather pathetic :( > We are where we are :) thanks again, I've made this change. I've also updated the graphic to a screenshot, let me know if it is too huge or if you like the spraycan better, etc. http://opensolaris.org/os/project/website/content/home_page_draft18/ Thanks, Michelle _______________________________________________ website-discuss mailing list [email protected]
