Hi Michelle,
Should the two instances of "web community" be "website community"? In
the first sentence, there's "Web Community." In the last sentence,
there's "web community." I'd suggest using initial capitals in both
instances.
Also, the following in italics sounds a bit awkward to my ear:
The OpenSolaris Web Community delivers phase 1 of the
/opensolaris.org site infrastructure transition/.
How about something like:
The OpenSolaris Website Community delivers phase 1 of the
infrastructure transition on the opensolaris.org site.
Cheers,
Alysson
Michelle Olson wrote:
Hi,
A draft feature spot for the web transition 2009 is here:
http://opensolaris.org/os/project/website/content/home_page_draft32/
Let me know what you think.
Thanks!
Michelle
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