@Diego, @Authors, Any comments? Thomas On Sun, Mar 5, 2017 at 2:13 PM, Yasuyuki Tanaka < [email protected]> wrote:
> Nice comments! > > I also want to see the definition of "effectively used cell" and > how to calculate PDR. > > In addition, I don't think that we would count the number of > cells used for 6P in terms of SF0. Is it correct? In any case, > some text on how SF0 should handle traffic or cell usage by 6P > would be helpful. > > Best, > Yatch > > > On 2017/03/05 11:20, Randy Turner wrote: > >> Hi All, >> >> After reading the current SF0 document, I had a few nits that I thought I >> would pass along - hope they’re helpful. >> >> >> Section 2: Introduction >> >> (The Scheduling Algorithm) >> >> “…under effective use…” the choice of wording seems unorthodox. >> >> Suggest the following “A portion of these allocated cells will be >> effectively utilized by neighbors, while the remaining cells can be >> over-provisioned to handle unanticipated increases in cell requirements” >> >> (The Relocation Algorithm) >> >> “Allocated cells may experiment packet loss” should be “Allocated cells >> may experience packet loss…” >> >> >> >> Section 4: SF0 Triggering Events >> >> 1. “…change in the current number of used cells” - could this be >> paraphrased to say “…a change in the number of required cells” ? >> >> >> >> Section 5: SF0 Estimation Algorithm >> >> The Cell Estimation Algorithm steps, # 2 - What is an “effectively” used >> cell? Could this just say “Collect the current number of used cells” ? >> >> There is actually quite a bit of emphasis in this document on the idea of >> an “effectively used cell” - perhaps we should explain the concept of an >> effectively used cell (or a reference if it’s already defined) - I was >> curious why the term “effective” is used so often? In the “Cell Estimation >> Algorithm” Step #2, the text reads: >> “Collect the current number of effectively used cells” — which would seem >> to imply that ineffectively used cells wouldn’t be included in this step. >> This may seem a too literal interpretation, I’m just looking for clarity as >> to whether or not the term “effective” or “effectively” is really needed in >> the doc. >> >> >> Section 11: Relocating Cells >> >> Just for completeness, I would emphasize how PDR is calculated, or >> include a reference to some other document if defined elsewhere >> >> >> >> >> Thanks for this work! >> Randy >> _______________________________________________ >> 6tisch mailing list >> [email protected] >> https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/6tisch >> >> > _______________________________________________ > 6tisch mailing list > [email protected] > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/6tisch > -- _______________________________________ Thomas Watteyne, PhD Research Scientist & Innovator, Inria Sr Networking Design Eng, Linear Tech Founder & co-lead, UC Berkeley OpenWSN Co-chair, IETF 6TiSCH www.thomaswatteyne.com _______________________________________
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