Great. So we can close this e-mail thread then. Thanks On Tue, Mar 28, 2017 at 2:54 PM, Prof. Diego Dujovne < [email protected]> wrote:
> Thomas, > During the last Webex I commented that > I used these comments to modify and correct > the draft. I eliminated (almost) every instance of > "effectively used cell" and fixed the problems > raised by Randy. > Regards, > > Diego > > 2017-03-28 9:31 GMT-03:00 Thomas Watteyne <[email protected]>: > >> @Diego, @Authors, >> Any comments? >> Thomas >> >> On Sun, Mar 5, 2017 at 2:13 PM, Yasuyuki Tanaka < >> [email protected]> wrote: >> >>> Nice comments! >>> >>> I also want to see the definition of "effectively used cell" and >>> how to calculate PDR. >>> >>> In addition, I don't think that we would count the number of >>> cells used for 6P in terms of SF0. Is it correct? In any case, >>> some text on how SF0 should handle traffic or cell usage by 6P >>> would be helpful. >>> >>> Best, >>> Yatch >>> >>> >>> On 2017/03/05 11:20, Randy Turner wrote: >>> >>>> Hi All, >>>> >>>> After reading the current SF0 document, I had a few nits that I thought >>>> I would pass along - hope they’re helpful. >>>> >>>> >>>> Section 2: Introduction >>>> >>>> (The Scheduling Algorithm) >>>> >>>> “…under effective use…” the choice of wording seems unorthodox. >>>> >>>> Suggest the following “A portion of these allocated cells will be >>>> effectively utilized by neighbors, while the remaining cells can be >>>> over-provisioned to handle unanticipated increases in cell requirements” >>>> >>>> (The Relocation Algorithm) >>>> >>>> “Allocated cells may experiment packet loss” should be “Allocated cells >>>> may experience packet loss…” >>>> >>>> >>>> >>>> Section 4: SF0 Triggering Events >>>> >>>> 1. “…change in the current number of used cells” - could this be >>>> paraphrased to say “…a change in the number of required cells” ? >>>> >>>> >>>> >>>> Section 5: SF0 Estimation Algorithm >>>> >>>> The Cell Estimation Algorithm steps, # 2 - What is an “effectively” >>>> used cell? Could this just say “Collect the current number of used cells” >>>> ? >>>> >>>> There is actually quite a bit of emphasis in this document on the idea >>>> of an “effectively used cell” - perhaps we should explain the concept of an >>>> effectively used cell (or a reference if it’s already defined) - I was >>>> curious why the term “effective” is used so often? In the “Cell Estimation >>>> Algorithm” Step #2, the text reads: >>>> “Collect the current number of effectively used cells” — which would >>>> seem to imply that ineffectively used cells wouldn’t be included in this >>>> step. This may seem a too literal interpretation, I’m just looking for >>>> clarity as to whether or not the term “effective” or “effectively” is >>>> really needed in the doc. >>>> >>>> >>>> Section 11: Relocating Cells >>>> >>>> Just for completeness, I would emphasize how PDR is calculated, or >>>> include a reference to some other document if defined elsewhere >>>> >>>> >>>> >>>> >>>> Thanks for this work! >>>> Randy >>>> _______________________________________________ >>>> 6tisch mailing list >>>> [email protected] >>>> https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/6tisch >>>> >>>> >>> _______________________________________________ >>> 6tisch mailing list >>> [email protected] >>> https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/6tisch >>> >> >> >> >> -- >> _______________________________________ >> >> Thomas Watteyne, PhD >> Research Scientist & Innovator, Inria >> Sr Networking Design Eng, Linear Tech >> Founder & co-lead, UC Berkeley OpenWSN >> Co-chair, IETF 6TiSCH >> >> www.thomaswatteyne.com >> _______________________________________ >> >> _______________________________________________ >> 6tisch mailing list >> [email protected] >> https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/6tisch >> >> > > > -- > DIEGO DUJOVNE > Profesor Asociado > Escuela de Informática y Telecomunicaciones > Facultad de Ingeniería - Universidad Diego Portales - Chile > www.ingenieria.udp.cl > (56 2) 676 8125 > -- _______________________________________ Thomas Watteyne, PhD Research Scientist & Innovator, Inria Sr Networking Design Eng, Linear Tech Founder & co-lead, UC Berkeley OpenWSN Co-chair, IETF 6TiSCH www.thomaswatteyne.com _______________________________________
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