Hello Yatch Many thanks for your review! Let's see below
> [Definition of 6P / Section 2.2 and Figure 1] > > In the terminology section, 6top is explained as follows: > > 6top (6TiSCH Operation Sublayer): The next highest layer of the IEEE > Std 802.15.4 TSCH medium access control layer. It > implements and terminates 6P, and contains at least one > SF. > > However, 6top doesn't contain SFs in Figure 1. My understanding on 6top is the > same as Figure 1. In addition, the original text says that 6top "contains at > least > one SF". However, 6TiSCH could work without SF. Then, the explanations of > 6top and 6P in Section 2.2 would be: > > 6top (6TiSCH Operation Sublayer): The next higher layer of the IEEE > Std 802.15.4 TSCH medium access control layer. It > provides the abstraction of an IP link over a TSCH > MAC, schedules packets over TSCH cells, and expose a management > interface to schedule TSCH cells. > [PT>] Great! > 6P (6top Protocol): Allows neighbor nodes to communicate to add/ > delete cells to one another in their TSCH schedule. 6P is > terminated at > the 6top layer. > [PT>] great also : ) Maybe I should use: "6P operates at the 6top layer"? > [Terminology / Section 2.2] > > Are these terms common? It seems so, but they are not used in the draft nor in > RFC7554/RFC8180/RFC8480, are they?: > > blacklist of frequencies: A set of frequencies which should not be > used for communication. > > broadcast cell: A scheduled cell used for broadcast transmission. > > Does "broadcast cell" means a cell having the broadcast MAC address in its > neighbor MAC address field? I'd like to have more text on them or to remove > them. [PT>] [PT>] Agreed to remove them > > ["6P protocol"] > "6P protocol" is used three times in the draft, which should be replaced with > "6P" (or "6top Protocol"). > [PT>] I fixed : ) either use 6P or 'the 6top protocol'. Many thanks again, Yatch. Take care, Pascal _______________________________________________ 6tisch mailing list 6tisch@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/6tisch
